ok, 10-20 lines, you spit first, ill-c.

You don’t understand this shit
Even though I’m new my flows haven’t been met
I’m the newest to the Ill-C’s
My freestyle got mad hype hookin’ me with G’s
I’m a fuckin’ white-boy goin’ for a poety degree
While you’ll be sweatin coverin it up with DeGree
Im gonna drop my flows
Like I drop bitches with them Ak’s and Calico’s
Now I know your thinking.. how’s this white-boy roll with the gats
Its cause I started with these freestyle raps
Then moved to beatin bitches with bats
Now I would call you a pussy but that’s not my style
When I freestyle I’m fuckin wild
Yo its 4:20 what are you doin at 10pm
This flow is over the joint is callin
Step in the way of it and ill busta cap like joesph stalin

Done
Kinda Shyt but meh its 4:20

beat bitches with bats, and mow 'em down with gats?
you just mad cuz they rejected you, and said that you're fat
so you thought you could fuck with the mighty bojangler?
my opinion is that you're gay, you're not quite straight, you're angular
i leave your fuckin neck distended like pez dispensers
then end your rappin career with verbal stabs, like fencers
fool with your medulla, and puncture your pons
then drain your body fluids like boston marathons
my guess is you're 35 years old, rolling your mom's corolla
ill-c? your rhymes wouldn't be ill even if i gave your ass ebola
but fuck battlin you, cuz i rack up KO's like pugilists
by the way, your mom said thanks, she never had anyone as huge as this
-janglemaster

good battle, for a first time and everything. keep it up.
-bojangler

for ure first time u did good
i give to bo for the punchlines

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nice battle...high as fuk

outskis

If you dont know who stalin is go back to history or look on google

Joseph Stalin

i know who stalin is ... why did you ask?

Joseph Stalin... here ill post a little about him....
1917 Russia had a communist revolution. The democratic government that had taken power in March was defeated and replaced by a Communist dictatorship under Lenin. A civil war broke out which lasted until 1921 (the “White Russians” i.e. supporters of the Tsar, were supported by Britain, Japan, Russia, USA and Canada. Troops were sent, but in the end the “Reds” i.e. Communists, won). Lenin died in 1924, a power struggle followed, eventually he was replaced by Joseph Stalin. Stalin introduced massive industrialization and the collective ownership of agriculture. All the peasants lost their land. During the 5 years plans massive industrialization took place. Agriculture virtually collapsed, millions of peasants starved to death. Industrialization took the form of heavy industry (i.e making things other factories needed, e.g. steel, hydro project). Propaganda claims said they met all their goals. Stalin had complete control of the media in all forms. The USSR became a great industrial power. Stalin was paranoid, he began purges to get rid of “undesirable elements”. He set up “show trials” where people “confessed” they were enemies of the state. These people included high ranking members of the Communist party, government officials, members of the armed forces, etc. Millions of people were killed by the secret police (KGB). Millions were sent into internal exile in prisons camps in Siberia called Gulags. Stalin killed between 20 to 30 million of his own people.

Lets get some votes now

aiight ill-C's....i dont think u came hard at all not many punches flow was off structure was off...wasnt feelin it that much...

Ill-C's best line...."Now I know your thinking.. how’s this white-boy roll with the gats
Its cause I started with these freestyle raps
Then moved to beatin bitches with bats"

^^ that was a ill line feelin that but overall u didnt do much

bojangler...came real nice i was feelin the punches..structure..flow..overall good verse

bojangler's best line...."fool with your medulla, and puncture your pons
then drain your body fluids like boston marathons"

^^ ill as line feelin it

overall nice drop by both but bojangler won this battle with just 2 or 3 of his bars

my vote: bojangler

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I dont expect to win this so meh

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