JUST LIKE YOU SAID, NO DR/CRES/HATE.EXEPT THIS TIME IMA SET IT UP.10 LINES IIGHT . LETS DO DIS.

__________________
TECHRHYMES

YO,YO,YO,
YOU SAY YOUR NAME IS HYBRID/
I KNOW YOU'S A MIXED CHILD CUZ IF WE MEET I SAY HI KID/
IV'E SEEN YOUR OTHER BATTLES/
YOU IIGHT BUT YOUR CHILDISH TECHNIQUES COULD PUT HOLES IN YOUR CATTLES/
YOU SHOULD KNOW WHERE IM FROM/
ITS NY AND IF YOU RUN OUR GUNZ'LL PUT A EXTRA HOLE IN YOUR BUN/
AND IF YOU DONT LIKE IT THEN SAY IT/
CUZ YOU SEE I'LL HAVE YOUR LADY SCREAMIN WHEN SHE SAW DAT I SPRAYED IT/
YOU WANT TEN LINES HOW ABOUT TEN BARS/
AND I'M PACKED WIT DAT HOT SHIT WHEN I SHUT YOUR MOUTH WIT TAR/
CUZ I'M GUESSIN YOU AINT NOTHIN BUT A CHOKED MOTHERFUCKER/
I BET IN PERSON YOU AINT NOTHIN BUT A JOKE LIKE CHRIS TUCKER/
IF YOU WANT SOME TIPS YOU COULD PEEK IN MY WINDOW/
THERE'S PLENTY POINTS TO SPREAD I'M PACKED YOU WOULD THINK I'M EARL WINSLOW/
SON IM'A SHIT ON YOU SO BAD/
NIGGAZ'LL THINK YOU CHOCOLATE YOU'LL BE ON DA TOP OF DA ADS/
WHEN I SPIT IT'S MY RULES/
SO YOU COULD SHOVE YO RHYMES BACK IN YOUR MOUTH IT'LL LOOK LIKE A SLIME GROOL/
AND I DONT THINK YOU COULD TAKE NINE FROM THE TECHNINE/
MY BARS ARE FULL AUTOMATIC IT'LL SPRAY YOUR STYLE DOWN SO YOU COULD REMEMBER THE NAME TECHRYMES.
HOLD DAT!

__________________
TECHRHYMES

Look at techrymes sig, he's shooting down his own name
rymes wacker than lil jon, thats the way you'll get fame
I've seen less commercial shit on tv, even during an addbreak
can you ever make a ryme, that hasnt been played or is fake
the only borough your from, is the hole you dug out in fun
by haveing as much skill as your avatar, thats right none
contemplate the fact you tried, but sorry it was all in vane
but if you ever read your shit, youd feel the annoying pain
flip a coin heads or tails either way i will always win
but keep the quarter now you wont have to eat of the bin.

__________________

re-posting and fixed spelling error word missing.



Look at techrymes sig, he's shooting down his own name
rymes wacker than lil jon, thats the way you'll get fame
I've seen less commercial shit on tv, even during an addbreak
can you ever make a ryme, that hasnt been played or is fake
the only borough your from, is the hole you dug out in fun
by haveing as much skill as your avatar, thats right none
contemplate the fact you tried, but sorry it was all in vane
but if you ever read your shit, youd feel the annoying pain
flip a coin heads or tails either way i will always win
so keep the quarter now you wont have to eat out of the bin.



so can we get the votes rolling will reply honest votes peace.

__________________

the breakdown baby

YO,YO,YO,
YOU SAY YOUR NAME IS HYBRID/
I KNOW YOU'S A MIXED CHILD CUZ IF WE MEET I SAY HI KID/
4
IV'E SEEN YOUR OTHER BATTLES/
YOU IIGHT BUT YOUR CHILDISH TECHNIQUES COULD PUT HOLES IN YOUR CATTLES/
3
YOU SHOULD KNOW WHERE IM FROM/
ITS NY AND IF YOU RUN OUR GUNZ'LL PUT A EXTRA HOLE IN YOUR BUN/
3
AND IF YOU DONT LIKE IT THEN SAY IT/
CUZ YOU SEE I'LL HAVE YOUR LADY SCREAMIN WHEN SHE SAW DAT I SPRAYED IT/
5
YOU WANT TEN LINES HOW ABOUT TEN BARS/
AND I'M PACKED WIT DAT HOT SHIT WHEN I SHUT YOUR MOUTH WIT TAR/
7
CUZ I'M GUESSIN YOU AINT NOTHIN BUT A CHOKED MOTHERFUCKER/
I BET IN PERSON YOU AINT NOTHIN BUT A JOKE LIKE CHRIS TUCKER/
5....how tucker a joke...ur an idiot...
IF YOU WANT SOME TIPS YOU COULD PEEK IN MY WINDOW/
THERE'S PLENTY POINTS TO SPREAD I'M PACKED YOU WOULD THINK I'M EARL WINSLOW/
4 any punches anytime....no not so far
SON IM'A SHIT ON YOU SO BAD/
NIGGAZ'LL THINK YOU CHOCOLATE YOU'LL BE ON DA TOP OF DA ADS/
3 i'm falling asleep
WHEN I SPIT IT'S MY RULES/
SO YOU COULD SHOVE YO RHYMES BACK IN YOUR MOUTH IT'LL LOOK LIKE A SLIME GROOL/
6 sort of a punch...i guess
AND I DONT THINK YOU COULD TAKE NINE FROM THE TECHNINE/
MY BARS ARE FULL AUTOMATIC IT'LL SPRAY YOUR STYLE DOWN SO YOU COULD REMEMBER THE NAME TECHRYMES
7.5 only decent liine

i would rather do this then read another line from techrymes...see that's a punch...get it?

now hybrid...i hope this is better...it's too late for another verse like that

Look at techrymes sig, he's shooting down his own name
rymes wacker than lil jon, thats the way you'll get fame
6.5 haah...decent
I've seen less commercial shit on tv, even during an addbreak
can you ever make a ryme, that hasnt been played or is fake
5 hmm...nope
the only borough your from, is the hole you dug out in fun
by haveing as much skill as your avatar, thats right none
8 boom...nice line
contemplate the fact you tried, but sorry it was all in vane
but if you ever read your shit, youd feel the annoying pain
7 haha i felt the pain lol
flip a coin heads or tails either way i will always win
but keep the quarter now you wont have to eat of the bin.
7 decent shit good job


v hybrid

UPPING thanx for the breakdown more votes needed peace.

__________________

i'm gonna break this down just like JPoll

YO,YO,YO,
YOU SAY YOUR NAME IS HYBRID/
I KNOW YOU'S A MIXED CHILD CUZ IF WE MEET I SAY HI KID/
3...Weak opener it made sense up to mixed child but that was it!
IV'E SEEN YOUR OTHER BATTLES/
YOU IIGHT BUT YOUR CHILDISH TECHNIQUES COULD PUT HOLES IN YOUR CATTLES/
4...weak again, the structure is off and it's not even really a punch!
YOU SHOULD KNOW WHERE IM FROM/
ITS NY AND IF YOU RUN OUR GUNZ'LL PUT A EXTRA HOLE IN YOUR BUN/
5...average, it hit but not very well!!
AND IF YOU DONT LIKE IT THEN SAY IT/
CUZ YOU SEE I'LL HAVE YOUR LADY SCREAMIN WHEN SHE SAW DAT I SPRAYED IT/
5...aight, but the punch had nuthin to do wit the setup line!!
YOU WANT TEN LINES HOW ABOUT TEN BARS/
AND I'M PACKED WIT DAT HOT SHIT WHEN I SHUT YOUR MOUTH WIT TAR/
6...probly ure best punch but still not that strong!!
CUZ I'M GUESSIN YOU AINT NOTHIN BUT A CHOKED MOTHERFUCKER/
I BET IN PERSON YOU AINT NOTHIN BUT A JOKE LIKE CHRIS TUCKER/
2...tucker is fuckin sick, he a funny fucker man...dont diss him!!
IF YOU WANT SOME TIPS YOU COULD PEEK IN MY WINDOW/
THERE'S PLENTY POINTS TO SPREAD I'M PACKED YOU WOULD THINK I'M EARL WINSLOW/
5...another aight punch with minimum connection.
SON IM'A SHIT ON YOU SO BAD/
NIGGAZ'LL THINK YOU CHOCOLATE YOU'LL BE ON DA TOP OF DA ADS/
4...weak!!
WHEN I SPIT IT'S MY RULES/
SO YOU COULD SHOVE YO RHYMES BACK IN YOUR MOUTH IT'LL LOOK LIKE A SLIME GROOL/
3...weak again!!
AND I DONT THINK YOU COULD TAKE NINE FROM THE TECHNINE/
MY BARS ARE FULL AUTOMATIC IT'LL SPRAY YOUR STYLE DOWN SO YOU COULD REMEMBER THE NAME TECHRYMES
5...aight finish but not that good!


Look at techrymes sig, he's shooting down his own name
rymes wacker than lil jon, thats the way you'll get fame
7...gud opener but it cud be improved!
I've seen less commercial shit on tv, even during an addbreak
can you ever make a ryme, that hasnt been played or is fake
6...good punch but didnt do what u intended!!
the only borough your from, is the hole you dug out in fun
by haveing as much skill as your avatar, thats right none
8...strong punch, funny shit!!
contemplate the fact you tried, but sorry it was all in vane
but if you ever read your shit, youd feel the annoying pain
7...good personal, i liked it!
flip a coin heads or tails either way i will always win
so keep the quarter now you wont have to eat out of the bin.
7...strong finisher!!

TOTALS
Techrhymes = 42
Tech spat too many lines tho it was 10 so i counted down to chris tucker
New total = 25
Hybrid = 35

Vote goes to Hybrid!!

Both y'all need to elevate, especially u techrhymes!!

__________________

Both of u all was close
I liked this line by Hybrid...flip a coin heads or tails either way i will always win
so keep the quarter now you wont have to eat out of the bin.
Good ender
YOU WANT TEN LINES HOW ABOUT TEN BARS/
AND I'M PACKED WIT DAT HOT SHIT WHEN I SHUT YOUR MOUTH WIT TAR/
That was a good line techrhymes...u had some nice rhymes I must say

In the end I will give it to Hybrid because he of his ending.

hit up this link both of y'all
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121373
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121363

__________________

^^ Upping thanx for the votes, keep em comeing and drop links.

__________________

wat????....?????
im sick off of wat king solo sed....u knocked his bar caz he made fun of chris tucker
da's a bitch move....im not gonna waste a whole bunch of time "breakin down" verses
here's the bottom line~ in laymens terms~ both verses need elevatin but tech needs the most elevatin....the area most needed....structure nigga i culdnt understand a single shit u sed......secondly hybrid punches need uppin caz a weak bar like yo "commercail" line can get u murked so work on that.....but hybrid won this one but yall BOTH NEED WORK

__________________

The Candy Shop!!!

IM PUSHIN AUDIO COCAINE

~strictly constructive critism~
competition is a must on this site how can u get better wit shitty emcees

__________________

The Candy Shop!!!

IM PUSHIN AUDIO COCAINE

4-0 my way Upping vote please and drop a link thanx peace.

__________________

Yo, check it. techrhymes's shit was all generic. No hard punches whatsoever, not really any structure to it either. Hey man, you could at least take the caps lock off ya shit man.
Hybrid had a good structure, kept to the set guidelines, good punches, and at least some intellect was used in his shit.

Sorry I didn't have time to break it down.
Vote// Hybrid

__________________
-=This ain't a game!=-
-=It's a way of life!=-