this is for a colab i got with my crew on another site........


i leave you trapped in physics cuz you could never match our chemistry//
call us John Cena offspring, cuz you cant see I.T.//
crews try ta match us, but cant come in clear like Directv//
yur lowest on the social order,surfs to our bourgeoisie//
we already got our degrees as elder emcees, yall still learnin ya A.B.C's//
we infect illness like hypodermic needless laced wit hepititas B//
this like marley doin a colab wit hendrix, its illness overkill//
Sanskrit aint shit, DOI is DOA and yall juss aint REALL//
we've owned ya asses even before yall started ta fall apart//
yur innercore is crashing, the mainframes fucked, but unlike a PC, you can't resart//
you cant pierce our inner thought wit katanas or barbs//
yur skills is like go fish to texas hold em, you juss cant play the cards//
thoughtz is a new age revolution, nuthin ever seen before//
FreestyleUnderground is our battle field, charlie, now ready for war//
have foes seizin up on the couch like a heroin addict//
we RESURECTED ILLNESS, then gaged and stabbed it//
got body parts all over the floor, call it an XCLUSIVE remix//
dont harrase me, i'll shut you off wit a simple left click//
we SKRYBE words and leave Skrit SHeL shocked//
we commin and bustin through bolts, it wont help ta keep ya doors locked//
leave ya worn out and beatin like the etnies you rock//
hit you with punch after punch, makin you fall like enron stock//



*bourgeoisie:the social class between the lower and upper classes
Sanskrit, resurected illness, REALL and DOI are crews on another site im on
skrybe and shell are members of skrit
Xclusive is a
memeber of RI
Inner Thoughtz is my crew

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well, i thought this was ok, very nice word-play n vocab, sum funny lines too witch r always good when readin, multies werent bad but could b improved along with creativitie.....

not bad overall.........elevate in areas....

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thanks for the feedback, uppin

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uppin

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upppin dammit

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who's dick needs to be sucked for sum feedback?

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fuck yall, dont kno how ta give feedback.........

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.................................................. .feedbaack

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shit was aight. nice vocab and i liked the texas line. i didnt like the structure and flow tho. i also didnt like the references there was to many (y rap bout other sites). i liked the ending bar also.

holla back at mine
THE SICKEST OF SICK

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