you know da rules!
-10 lines
-blind spits
-due 30 min after check in.

HURRY UP AND CHECK IN!!!

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aight check,
u spit first dawg holla,
may the best man win holla

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

i already said blind spit nigga!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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dude im new to this fourm shit, what u mean blind spit?
u mean spit at same time right?

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

Do the mic check for you? The fuck? You need asisstance???
Some help to turn it on or just to get us to listen?
We see you rant and rave in public ain't no haven to hide it,
Ya skill is lacking RB is clackin up our weapons to fight it,
A million candles on your grave yet only seven I lighted......
You Killed from actions of Wessons I leave the heavens divided
I fold you in HALF bitch, and put a crease to your BELT
bitch, YOU COULDN'T BEAT ME IF YOU WAS JESUS HIMSELF
So, once and for all, hoes and cunts wanna brawl, so I let em....
Then I dead 'em left the RB to forget 'em.

BLAH, KEYED IT IN 5 MINUTES.
HURRY UP!!!

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Some call me tyme cuz i cant be stopped,
like a grandfather clock fallin ur as be knocked,

Ur like an etcha-sketch cuz u get shaked and will fade away,
the only reason u try to rap is to follow me cuz i paved the way,

i can tell by ur shit that u aint no MC killa,
your rhymes have no flow like a punk ass vanilla,

You try to act hard, gangsta with da wife beater,
Go ahead soon ill turn ur life meter,

U think that u can flow and that ur original?,
man lossing and taking it to u is habitual.

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

aight, lets get some votes up in this,
holla uppN fo Votes

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

uppin #1...............
...........................

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dont let this sleep, uppN ^^^ holla!
lets get some votes up in hurrrrrrrrrrrrr.

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

dis was a ok battle
both of yall hit some punches here and there both need a lil elavation doe but nice battle

Idealism-

bestline-Do the mic check for you? The fuck? You need asisstance???
Some help to turn it on or just to get us to listen?

ok start

worsteline-So, once and for all, hoes and cunts wanna brawl, so I let em....
Then I dead 'em left the RB to forget 'em.

^^nottt 2 good

20

bestline-Some call me tyme cuz i cant be stopped,
like a grandfather clock fallin ur as be knocked,

ok start

worste line none

overall

punches-20
flow-Idealism
vocab-Idealism
structure-20
open-20
close-20
personals-Idealism
winner-20

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this battle was iight but not all that
this is how it went down
open=20
close=20
punches=20
flow=20
vocab=idea
wordplay=idea
structure=idea
vote=20

thats bullshit!!!!
CHOPPA THAT WAS A DICKRIDE VOTE.
STOP SUCKING HIS DICK CAUSE HES IN YOUR CREW BITCH.
FUCKING BITCH ASS NEWBS!!!!!!!1

IM SICK OF THESE FUCKING NEWBS!!!!!!!!!!

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Okay heres the breakdown to this shit
Idealism:
flow:/10
Creativity:6/10
punches:7/10

20grands:
flow:7/10
creativity:7/10
punches:7/10


My vote goes to 20grands by a tiny bit.. much props to both

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121594
^^vote

Ideal-Really whack opener.But you were creative but not hard enough.Like this line
A million candles on your grave yet only seven I lighted......
^^creative,but how does it diss ur oppenent?It seems like it was filler setting up for ur next line.But if add fillers,at least make it try to diss the other guy.
Verse was far from Ideal.Nice flow though.


20 Grand-Nice simile and metaphor in ur opener.
your rhymes have no flow like a punk ass vanilla,
^^first off,comparing ur opponent to vannila ice is played out.And you didn't add ice to it,so it was obviously just there to rhyme with other line.
Flow was not like ur oppenent.But punches were way better.

Ur like an etcha-sketch cuz u get shaked and will fade away,
the only reason u try to rap is to follow me cuz i paved the way,
^^this was prob. ur best line
Too bad ur closer was not as good.

Overall-OK battle,for newbs.Ideal had the flow,but 20 had punches.But off course,Punches out weigh flow.

Vote-20