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04-30-04, 10:27 AM
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dont fall in love
IP: 7A52 73B1
DON'T FALL IN LOVE
the eye are like river of sorrow where flow tears every moment they tell people thay keep telling do not invite misery never fall in love Don;t ever fall in love God has forgotten all about me but i could never forget my belove so much of wine i have already drunk my eye brim with tears i had someone with me too love is a funeral of the heart don't treat it it as an occasion of joy love's momentary my friend |
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04-30-04, 10:29 AM
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IP: 7A52 73B1
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05-01-04, 06:49 PM
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yawn
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IP: 06D4 9403
umm, i really dont like short lined poems... this was alright... you need elevatin though.
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