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LostChild | 5 | 62.50% | |
DisasterPeice420 | 3 | 37.50% | |
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04-22-04, 07:44 PM | #1 | |
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DisasterPeice420 Vs. LostChild
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04-22-04, 07:48 PM | #2 | |
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Checkin in and just to let people know what the stakes are if She beats me I have to leave this site
So I betta come with my A game Squad Up |
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04-22-04, 07:50 PM | #3 | |
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A'right' Get It Heated' - - - You Have 20Min To Drop
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04-22-04, 08:05 PM | #4 | |
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On the Hood if she beat me im leaving
But when I beat her she gone be mad like when her pussy be bleeding Look bitch I ain't gone be nice when it comes to my life I seen yo pictures on my block you couldn't even get fucked twice You just anotha ho that got a little flow Only mic you holdin is my dick when you deep throat To me you ain't nothing but a wanna be eve My flow a put you in a familiar place, DOWN ON YOUR KNEES I know thugs in my hood that a make you reach for yo feet DisataterPiece, this dick a put you to sleep Squad up, LostChild, It get no sicker If you don't make it in the rap game, YOU COULD BE A STRIPPER Or a bustdown slut, so girl open up Only good thing out yo mouth, IS WHEN YOU SPITTIN OUT NUT |
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04-22-04, 08:08 PM | #5 | |
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A'right Playa Fair Verse!!!! - - - Checckity Checck .... - Checkin In
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04-22-04, 08:21 PM | #6 | |
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Checckity Checck
Introduction: I Aint Got To Be Thick To Take A Bitch Like You Plus I Got Gats That Go Click Before They Go Boom - Lol Body: Your Sealing Your Doom By Perpetrating This Rap You Keep Yappin Your Fat Lips Without Sayin Crap Talking Bout I Stole Your Style, When Your Raps Are Flat If I Stole Something That Worthless I'd Probably Give It Back You Fell Into My Trap When You Called Reinforcements Your Friends Are About As Qualified As My Doorman You Visited The Rap Store And Probably Baught Your Lyrics I Might Be White Like A Ghost, I'll Send You To Holy Spirits Call Mommy Deares And Tell Her Some Cracker White Bread Mutha-Fucker Gigured Out That Your An Actor Not A Rappa You Cant Compete With My Wealth Or The Way That I Get It I Just Caught Another Case, But Got That Shit Aquitted Survival Of The Fittest, That Why I Throw Down You Talking Shit, Thats Why You Acting A Clown Playing It Down Like You Black And Hard But You Can't Even Rap You Fucking Retard Im Insain In This And Your Some Carbon Copy MuthaFucka Tradeing Off Raps Cause You Can't Think Of No Otha Conclusion: Butt Buddies & Brothers I Know What You Mean 'Under-Tha-Covers' You Prolly One Of Them Broke Kids Hanging With Sally Struthers Since I Know You Are Broke And I Aint Hatin Take My Advice Ask Sally Struthers For A Rap Donation Sorry Got Over - Excited lol
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04-22-04, 08:26 PM | #7 | |
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Good little shit
I don't know I think I gotcha |
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04-22-04, 08:45 PM | #8 |
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DiaseterPeice-"Playing It Down Like You Black And Hard"
"But You Can't Even Rap You Fucking Retard" " Survival Of The Fittest, That Why I Throw Down" " You Talking Shit, Thats Why You Acting A Clown" ^it's lines like these that u gotta stop using.But don't worry,it didn't affect ur rap as a whole.U had some really nice punches,good opener,and a somewaht good closer. LostChild-You had some OK punches,but not up-par to DisasterPeice.But u didn't get creative.It seemed like u mainly dropped on her for being a girl and those lines were not as good.Nothing's wrong wit u dropping on her being a girl,but most of tose lines were not creative or original enough. Squad up, LostChild, It get no sicker-9 sllyables If you don't make it in the rap game, YOU COULD BE A STRIPPER-15 sllyables On the Hood if she beat me im leaving-10 sllyables But when I beat her she gone be mad like when her pussy be bleeding-17 sllyables See,that was also a big problem.You can't just go from 10-17 or 9-15 sllyables.That was a major problem that u had.Disatster had this problem too,but not as bad as u.Keep lines the about the same #of sllyables. Vote-DisasterPiece |
04-22-04, 08:53 PM | #9 | |
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DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN! SAY WHAT! SAY WHAT DIS IS DA BATTLE RIGHT HURRR! FIGHT FO YO LIFE! DA STATUS LIKE DIS
LC=On the Hood if she beat me im leaving But when I beat her she gone be mad like when her pussy be bleeding// YO IT WAS BOMB ASS INTRO LC=Look bitch I ain't gone be nice when it comes to my life I seen yo pictures on my block you couldn't even get fucked twice// LOL DATS SOME BOMB PERSONAL SHIT! LC=You just anotha ho that got a little flow Only mic you holdin is my dick when you deep throat// PUNCHLINES 7/10 LC=To me you ain't nothing but a wanna be eve My flow a put you in a familiar place, DOWN ON YOUR KNEES I know thugs in my hood that a make you reach for yo feet DisataterPiece, this dick a put you to sleep Squad up, LostChild, It get no sicker If you don't make it in the rap game, YOU COULD BE A STRIPPER// LOL KEEP PUNCHING NIGGA! LC=Only good thing out yo mouth, IS WHEN YOU SPITTIN OUT NUT// DAT WAS AIGHT ENDING YO DISASTER DISASTER=I Aint Got To Be Thick To Take A Bitch Like You Plus I Got Gats That Go Click Before They Go Boom - Lol BOMB AS INTRO DISASTER=Your Sealing Your Doom By Perpetrating This Rap You Keep Yappin Your Fat Lips Without Sayin Crap Talking Bout I Stole Your Style, When Your Raps Are Flat If I Stole Something That Worthless I'd Probably Give It Back// YO DID HE SAY ANYTHNG DAT U STOLE// OK NOTHIN SHUT DA FUCK UP DISASTER=You Fell Into My Trap When You Called Reinforcements Your Friends Are About As Qualified As My Doorman You Visited The Rap Store And Probably Baught Your Lyrics I Might Be White Like A Ghost, I'll Send You To Holy Spirits// PUNCHES 7/10 DISASTER=White Bread Mutha-Fucker Gigured Out That Your An Actor Not A Rappa You Cant Compete With My Wealth Or The Way That I Get It I Just Caught Another Case, But Got That Shit Aquitted// YO NICE PUNCHES 8/10 DA REST WAS SHITTY// BUT LOOK DA STATUS IS DAT LC HAD BOMB PUNCHES// NICE FLOWZ//WACK STRUTURE// DISASTER=NICE PUNCHES BUT U START STRONG AND END SLO// U START STRONG STAY STRONG// BOMB AS PUNCHES// NICE FLOWZ// KILLA STRUTURE MY VOTE GOES TOO=LC Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Crew vote removed - strobe
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04-22-04, 08:54 PM | #10 | |
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!! Daps.. Thanks For The Vote Good Looking Out!!! - - - Upppin 4 More Votes!! People!! C'Mon
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04-22-04, 08:57 PM | #11 | |
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Lmfao Shit You Should Be On My BlackList' ..!! I Never Did' .. Get Along The Best With You ToxicVerbs' ..!! So Don't Hold A Grudge On Me Mutha-Fucka' ..!!
Anyways... Uppppppin 4 Votes
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04-22-04, 08:59 PM | #12 | |
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wow this was good....
Lost Child-good punches...favorite one..Squad up, LostChild, It get no sicker If you don't make it in the rap game, YOU COULD BE A STRIPPER ...u could have re-worded it to make it iller....ur structure was a lil off...not every line was exact...work on that...u picked the wrong time to battle disater...but if it was anyone else..u would have prolly won... D-Talking Bout I Stole Your Style, When Your Raps Are Flat If I Stole Something That Worthless I'd Probably Give It Back....that was my favorite punchline...was very personal...ur punches were good just not all that hott..and niggaz say ur the illest? LOOK AT THE PPL U BATTLE...not countin lost child...lol jk...ur meta's,flow and structure was all there....i just thought u could have come harder... vote-D,nice opener,and ending...punches out did lost child's....honest vote.. |
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04-22-04, 09:02 PM | #13 | |
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1 to 1 damn girl Its close
I got to give it to you do you got skills but I ain't trying to leave |
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04-22-04, 09:02 PM | #14 | |
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Thanks For The Honest Vote QuiCckPunch' .. Good Looking Out!!!!! .. Appriciate It!!
Upppppppppppppppin 4 Votes ... People C'Mon
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04-22-04, 09:11 PM | #15 | |
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lost child won this battle i felt he had better punches.but u need to fix the syllable problem in your flowz.but it waz very close though i had to read each flow about two times each very close
vote:lost child |
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