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05-01-04, 09:41 PM
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Miss Me?
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Keystyle by L.I.
IP: D5EA 4189
This was a lil keystyle i did the other night while was thrashed....any of yall think its good?.....
got shit on my mind so decided to write a song this is dedicated to al the girls ill prove wrong see i know the time is right but u disagree i aint gonna sing like ja did but this is my las plea i sound pussy but fasho i really wanna be with you so i am writin shit from ym heart thats purr and true so do what u want and disagree with what i say but im tellin u the truth i wanna be with u everyday shit... timing was neva my best attribute but i guarantee that im meant for u i understand if u dont like me bu i just want a chance shit ur so perfect i'd be satisfied with jus 1 dance i keystyled this nonstop cuz ur steady on my mind so hopefully the next girl wont leave me behind fuck this im done, bouncin, im out jus realize wut u lost n wut im bout
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05-01-04, 09:52 PM
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IP: 5E90 FCE6
ummm trashed says it j/p lol not to bad 6.4/10
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05-01-04, 10:08 PM
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IP: D5EA 4189
lol jus a lil keystyle ya no.........thanks up...............
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05-01-04, 11:06 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
yea, this wasn't one of the hottest things you have written. I've seen much better from you. I would give it a 6/10. At some parts I didn't feel the flow that much. It was aiight, though
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05-02-04, 05:25 PM
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New to RB
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IP: 4289 77F4
wasn't that hot/
could of did a lot better/ trashed say's it/ |
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05-02-04, 09:24 PM
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Miss Me?
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IP: D5EA 4189
lol yeah......this ish is jus a lil sumtin.......trust me.....i do a lot betta.....
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05-02-04, 09:28 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 3240 794D
Kinda weak dogg, its hard to write about shit you haven't experienced, man you 14 how many gurls been in your life seriouly man, stick to what ya know an you'll drop hot verses like the ones you've dropped before, but you really fell off here. 5/10
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05-02-04, 10:01 PM
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IP: D5EA 4189
yeah yeah yeah..........u jus dont understand how i feel....sike nah....ill drop a good open mic later...but for now im out........peace.....
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