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05-11-04, 01:48 PM | #1 | ||||||
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this is it
IP: 7BE2 A0A1
i dont know what im doin behind these cold BARS i dont know what ive been TOLD/
thinkin of all this bullshit in side of my CAR stickin up for all these bastards i must be very BOLD/ i might as well quit cuz i aint got no FANS seems like i only got my GAT/ it seems i got a fuckin girl friend whos a TRANS im sick of bein hit in the back wit a BAT/ so much weight, im stuck in this BUBBLE with no fuckin FRIENDS/ im alwasy gettin in more TROUBLE with all these people takin my TRENDS/ i guess ill never be able to DOUBLE cuz im actin like a FOOL/ now im gettin crushed in this RUBBLE in this fuckin blood POOL/ like im mother fuckin HUBBLE now this aint COOL/ i need to work hard so i could ever get my THRONE/ but i think i should give up cuz im breakin my BONES/ mabye i should end it by putin a bullet in my DOME/ i dont think ill ever get to be mother fuckin FAMOUS/ but maybe im jus turnin into an IGNORAMUS/ (ignorant person) i feel like im bein fuckin ATTACKED/ but untill then ima go underground so i can ADAPT/ quick 5 minute shit....uppin for replys
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05-11-04, 01:54 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 6C8E 5424
dom is dat u? it's me mak4real?
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05-11-04, 01:58 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 4289 77F4
^^^^huh?
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05-11-04, 02:29 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 3700 1584
you added a couple of more rhyming words per line, wich is good, but try not to type em in caps, it makes it seem even more monotonous than it has to be, I think ya lines are too long to.
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05-11-04, 03:16 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 4289 77F4
yea thats the first time i tried that shit...i put it in caps to let yall know i was rhyin the words
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