i dont know what im doin behind these cold BARS i dont know what ive been TOLD/
thinkin of all this bullshit in side of my CAR stickin up for all these bastards i must be very BOLD/
i might as well quit cuz i aint got no FANS seems like i only got my GAT/
it seems i got a fuckin girl friend whos a TRANS im sick of bein hit in the back wit a BAT/
so much weight, im stuck in this BUBBLE with no fuckin FRIENDS/
im alwasy gettin in more TROUBLE with all these people takin my TRENDS/
i guess ill never be able to DOUBLE cuz im actin like a FOOL/
now im gettin crushed in this RUBBLE in this fuckin blood POOL/
like im mother fuckin HUBBLE now this aint COOL/
i need to work hard so i could ever get my THRONE/
but i think i should give up cuz im breakin my BONES/
mabye i should end it by putin a bullet in my DOME/
i dont think ill ever get to be mother fuckin FAMOUS/
but maybe im jus turnin into an IGNORAMUS/ (ignorant person)
i feel like im bein fuckin ATTACKED/
but untill then ima go underground so i can ADAPT/

quick 5 minute shit....uppin for replys

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dom is dat u? it's me mak4real?

^^^^huh?

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you added a couple of more rhyming words per line, wich is good, but try not to type em in caps, it makes it seem even more monotonous than it has to be, I think ya lines are too long to.

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yea thats the first time i tried that shit...i put it in caps to let yall know i was rhyin the words

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