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05-03-04, 06:10 PM
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The Truth
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Terror:Da Army V3
IP: 5E90 FCE6
Ight my own little Anthem
Were the iLLest on the Block with the Mic Connection// Spitten Vemon and leavin u with a Lyrical Infection// Da Best and Da iLLest is what i see in our Reflection// Ur crew rolls in Small Clubs we hit the Big Arenas// Straight Cut Throat Killas is what were Seen-As// 1,2,3 Is the warnin we give for a Lyrical MeltDown// We keep Bitch ass Crew's Flow's on LockDown// Crews wantin the Respect we got DownTown// Step to Da Army and Consider Urself the next Defeat// Just are Deadly Presence makes ur Crew wanna Retreat// Uppin opinions
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05-03-04, 10:48 PM
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The Truth
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IP: 5E90 FCE6
is it so bad no feedback
 
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05-04-04, 07:33 AM
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i'm feelin your flow. Keep it comin
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05-04-04, 04:44 PM
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GrOwN aSs MaN
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sup dawg..
1--try droppin somethin longer next time...makes it more worth while to read ok... Flow was off because you rushed the lines The rhyming was a tad basic too...try more internal rhyming and multi-syllables up imagery jus elevate dawg stay up 1 |
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