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04-17-04, 01:07 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Different race - First drop
IP: D280 BCD2
White clouds cover the ground as I walk
Serene sounds broken only for crowds of neighborly talk With a gray hazy fog keeping the heat away while we get along Above I see a rainbow with true colors exposed Shown in a strait line, they never divide or collide, until the wind is blown -The yellow, the white- They say hello, without any fights -The black, the brown- They look back, and grow proud But of course I’m forced from this dream As a bottle of alcohol collides, with the wall The Flames divide, with a sudden squall Looking out my window sill my heart remains still As I search side to side, while the shadows are on a crawl To escape the pain and agony during this brawl Now the colors are exposed ,the darkest are hopen' while being sprayed by fire hydrants Where the peach try not to stray as they try n' hide it While the true whites preach and fight it While profound men awake Things that were confound must be remade "It’s separate but equal" they recited But that didn't pass for the people, so your highness decided to strike it Creating diversity into our schools Making unity onto our stools Bringing hate and love into one room Armed guards assumed position On a mission to protect the ones presumed different But that was just a prequel to the sequel, for everyman is created equal. We stride for the one goal in our lives We’re given a quick hole in return for our pride A way around these long lines and a special slice of the whole pie They see us differently, as if we need some extra help To get through the 7 levels of hell I’m no different from Miguel and Danielle But in fact no one is different, it’s just the mind state we are given Discrimination is due to the teachings of a generation The promotion of diversity, allows the emotions to think differently For there is no diversity in this nation, because we're boiling in the melting pot For there is only Unity for you and me, in case you forgot |
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04-18-04, 12:23 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: D280 BCD2
can someone give me some feed?
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05-04-04, 08:52 PM | #3 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
wow thats pretty good way to approach a touchy and feared subject.
Though by trying to be "proud" are we not perpetuating the concept that people are different? That itself is also a problem.
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05-04-04, 09:17 PM | #4 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
also I thought that it was good.
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