ok here we go no more then ten to fifteen lines

no crew d/r or hate votes

its no mystery, how victory, always seems to stick-to-me, i leave you lost in history, like you didnt ever exhist-to-me/
i tip-foes, quicker then i can rip-clothes off hoes, at a local strip-show, its like my script-knows, to flip-flows, and inflict-blows, that hit harder then when my clip-goes/
i gave you a whip and you couldnt snap-it,you cant say a verse let alone rap-it, you could put a HAT-ON, turn youre GAT-ON, turn the CAPS-ON (cap locks button) and you still couldnt CAP-IT/
youre trap slaps fake crap, like a fake thug, with a fake gat/
you need to get a check-up, if you think that ill let-up, but since you stepped-up, you better get dressed-up,cause im not STOPPIN, zip the vest-up cause im POPPIN, until youre messed-up, chest-up in a COFFIN/


sHiFtY fInGeRs = Sonek = Graphex = DQ'ed

lines to be explained hat-on(also called a cap) turn youre gat-on (when you cap someone with a gun) and turn youre caps-on (cap locks button ) meaning youre dumb and you could do all these things and still fuck up somehow

last verse with all the multi's, i say you need to get dressed-up because its like youre dressing for youre own funeral cause i say you'll end up messed-up chest-up in a coffin
the rest is self explanatory
i hit with some hard punches in this one and good word play and excellent use of multi's so good luck with this one

CHECK IN..... REMEMBER YOU WANTED THIS.... And I hate people that explain what they did... If peeps think your verse is nice then they'll vote for you... don't hype yourself up....

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You remind me of a "BROKEN DOWN RESPIRATOR" because "YOUR LINES ARE BLANK"/
You think you real nice but you "GOT A BIG HEAD" just like "TYRA BANKS/

Its ridiculous, you ain't no lyricist, MAN I'M SICK OF THIS!!!!!/
I'll give you some "TIPS" on your flow but not the ones that "STRIPPERS GET"/
You must be on some liqour shit cuz U Talkin Guns LIKE YOU CRIPPIN IT/
The only thing that you need to be "RAPPIN" is "CHRISTMAS GIFTS"/

I stay wit "JUELZ" like that nigga from CAM'S "D-SET"
Everybody thought I was A Cash Money Rapper cuz they said,"MAN HE'S FRESH"/ (Manny Fresh)

Your Girl seen me spit and she MASTURBATED IN HER HOUSE/
And Then she gave me so much "BRAIN" I "GRADUATED FROM HER MOUTH"/

Its nothing.... Chump.... HAHAHA

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pretty close vote but my votes goes to shifty simply for flow and structure. punches were about the same. shifty yet another masterpiece.
shifty best line-its no mystery, how victory, always seems to stick-to-me, i leave you lost in history, like you didnt ever exhist-to-me
worst line-youre trap slaps fake crap, like a fake thug, with a fake gat
boy best line-Its ridiculous, you ain't no lyricist, MAN I'M SICK OF THIS!!!!!/
I'll give you some "TIPS" on your flow but not the ones that "STRIPPERS GET"/
worst line-You must be on some liqour shit cuz U Talkin Guns LIKE YOU CRIPPIN IT
vote/shifty

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yo return the vote plz

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Sup Its A Hard Choice But Im Going To Have To Go With Shifty i Personaly Like Hes Better Nice Job

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Its nothing.... Chump.... HAHAHA..................

uppin this shit ..................................

man shify that flow was ill the the mast amouts of multis left my head spinning.
and genious your shit didn't even rhyme dude sorry but my vote goes to shifty.

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I'm better than Eminem, and quicker than most of them. I flow like the snow, and pimp on all them hoes

If you do beat me then good shit, but look at the bums that are voting on this battle... I should've came with a couple more lines but that was my fault. But we need real emcees to vote on this battle.... not no bums... but its cool. If I take a loss then I'll take it like a man.... But the only thing Im spitting in from now on is the Lyrical League because Im getting sick of bums voting on my shit.... The one dude didn't even have an explanation and the other dude said my shit didn't even rhyme..... What the fuck he talkin bout... my goodness..... And Shifty don't mimick me again homie...

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this shit was hotter than a bitch getting fuckd lol DA Boy GEnious- yo beginning sucked ass but the middle and closing had some pretty serious knockdown punches
shifty- those multis were fuckin sweet dude but shitty lined messed u up -youre trap slaps fake crap, like a fake thug, with a fake gat/ that line was shitty and messed up ya masterpeice i have to go with DA BOY GENIUS winning by a centimeter..............no hate man come return the fava and vote on fine minds battle with me plz

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WhItE CrAcA

Looking for a crew to join hit me up pm me and ill respond back

yea u might look tough but in the end this shit
is mine u can intimidate but still have the same fate, losin to me - White Craca

I thought this would be a hot battle Genius with the heavy blows and Shifty
with he's Dark flows....

Who said Genius's Opener was shit?
You remind me of a "BROKEN DOWN RESPIRATOR" because "YOUR LINES ARE BLANK"/
That shit fat..

Best Punch Genius
I stay wit "JUELZ" like that nigga from CAM'S "D-SET"
Everybody thought I was A Cash Money Rapper cuz they said,"MAN HE'S FRESH"/ (Manny Fresh)

Best punch Shifrty
i tip-foes, quicker then i can rip-clothes off hoes, at a local strip-show, its like my script-knows, to flip-flows, and inflict-blows, that hit harder then when my clip-goes/

I think Shifty one this in ever department


Vote Shifty..

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uppin this shit....................................