wassup all, Ive never battled online before, from New Zealand, 21 years old, recorded a couple of songs, battled at a lil place in NZ called "Catalyst"

Here's my latest pre-writtin shit, I usually freestyle tho

Pull a cone
Hammer ya zone
The skull carpenter
equipt with pens
and the force of zen
Taser make ya hit the floor again
its oriental
spittin out my dental
im strippin you and ya crew of ya credentials
takin the globe in a sequential
order
big mac with no fries
eliminating time
and taking mine



can i get a bit of feedback?

shot

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