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spits due by the end of today, i'll prolly start mine at night, who knows when, but i gotta go out today and do errands and shit. good luck hatter.

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lost-2 deadlyvisionz king solo
won-3 quickpunch,gotaasswhoopin4u, orijinal, madhatter81

okayy

you claim to be a gangsta so wheres ya gun/
this bitch hails from phoenix imma eclips the "sun"

im the winner..already in the winners circle/
dont hold ya breath for votes cuz you'll just turn purple

bitch you'll suffacate ya brains will explode/
dude you a hoe and right tit is exposed

my finisher will determen ya fate/
all you is a net rapper who gonna sign you bill gates

my punchlines you and make ya eye turn black and blue/
put sticks on ya eardrums and make beats like the neptunes

i'll make you sweat till loose weight like al roaker/
the closest thing to a gun you had was a super soaker

to you imma do the most sinniester sin/
kill you cuz you aint hard bitch stop the shananagins

put you six feet under wit a murderious flow/
make you a lawn ornament like a nome or pink falmingo

thats all

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my 30 minutes starts now.
peace

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lost-2 deadlyvisionz king solo
won-3 quickpunch,gotaasswhoopin4u, orijinal, madhatter81

ok, i won't feed, just to be fair to you,
not like there's shit to eat, this fool is dishin shit soup.

ur 13 and running with CS, that's a no no, come get a spanky,
my method of murder's got u cryin for ur blanky.

my murderous-method's get methodically-more-merky,
i must-be messed up in the mind for me to be murdering a 13.

leave the crime scene to the adults kid, we do'nt want u to get hurt,
i follow BIG and PAC, who u follow? ernie and burt?

with a name like madhatter ur just askin to get plastered,
what'd u do to the rhyme? better get mommy to clean up that disaster.

oh, and tell her i said hi!

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lost-2 deadlyvisionz king solo
won-3 quickpunch,gotaasswhoopin4u, orijinal, madhatter81

let's get them votes in ppl, good battle hatter.

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lost-2 deadlyvisionz king solo
won-3 quickpunch,gotaasswhoopin4u, orijinal, madhatter81

uppin for votes, please vote on battles in my sig if got time too!

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lost-2 deadlyvisionz king solo
won-3 quickpunch,gotaasswhoopin4u, orijinal, madhatter81

uppin this shit for votes ppl, leave a link and we'll return the favor!

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lost-2 deadlyvisionz king solo
won-3 quickpunch,gotaasswhoopin4u, orijinal, madhatter81

uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! come on, i'll return the favor! remember that!

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lost-2 deadlyvisionz king solo
won-3 quickpunch,gotaasswhoopin4u, orijinal, madhatter81

uppin once again, come on ppl, this battle was pretty hot, let's get some votes, we'll return the favor!

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lost-2 deadlyvisionz king solo
won-3 quickpunch,gotaasswhoopin4u, orijinal, madhatter81

can we get some votes PLEASE! jebus crizzist, we'll return the favor!

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lost-2 deadlyvisionz king solo
won-3 quickpunch,gotaasswhoopin4u, orijinal, madhatter81

upping for votes, come on ppl

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lost-2 deadlyvisionz king solo
won-3 quickpunch,gotaasswhoopin4u, orijinal, madhatter81

let's get some more votes ppl PLEASE, we'll return the favor, i wanna get this shit over with!

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lost-2 deadlyvisionz king solo
won-3 quickpunch,gotaasswhoopin4u, orijinal, madhatter81

uppin for votes yall, come on, i'll vote ifu leave a damn link!

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lost-2 deadlyvisionz king solo
won-3 quickpunch,gotaasswhoopin4u, orijinal, madhatter81

upping, what the fuck ya'll? why can't u take 8 minutes to read and vote, shiiiiiiiiiiit

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lost-2 deadlyvisionz king solo
won-3 quickpunch,gotaasswhoopin4u, orijinal, madhatter81

nice verses from both hatter had a couple good punches and wordplay but didnt come that hard wasnt feelin his verse that much u had a tight closer and opener but u had some filler and lines that werent to creative/original...

overall: 6/10

sid had some killa punches and good opener and closer again not much filler maybe 1 line and i loved this bar...
"leave the crime scene to the adults kid, we do'nt want u to get hurt,
i follow BIG and PAC, who u follow? ernie and burt?"
feeling that shyt type ill...nice wordplay and multies on the last bar good verse could have done better but overall u was nice....

sid: 7.5/10

vote:sid....overall i think he had the better verse and his opener closer and that line ^^there about ernie and bert sealed it nice shyt from both sid takes it

~1~

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