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Old 05-07-04, 06:26 PM   #1
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still fucked up(2nd half to other one thats on a different site)

IP: 7BE2 A0A1

(chorus)
cuz i got a fucked up life but im an ill emcee/
dont fuck wit me, i wont sign now peace treaty/
i jus rap to get shit up off my fuckin back/
doin it wit dis new motherfuckin track/
(verse one)
see yall i wont settle shit wit others and i wont settle differences/
but i will rap wit ya ass cuz im not so fuckin different/
listen to my rap cuz its da shit wit its rhymes subliminal/
and yes im confessing, i am a motherfuckin criminal/
and i wont be able to settle wit if you cunfront-me/
only time im ever peacefull is when i smoke dis blunt-G/
makin track after track, ill make my cd as a fuckin stunt/
dissin profecys ass cuz hes a mother fuckin cunt/
bitch ass wont ever find love, might as well be a nun/
yo prof youre ass wont ever be as good as me son/
if yall even think of dissin me ya made a mistake/
cuz im not da one to fuck wit me, im not da one to dis-hate/
(chorus)
cuz i got a fucked up life but im an ill emcee/
dont fuck wit me, i wont sign now peace treaty/
i jus rap to get shit up off my fuckin back/
doin it wit dis new motherfuckin track/
(verse two)
one fool came up to me and started to fuckin diss-me/
i pulled out my glock and he started sayin "peace-G"/
i said "bitch you can get peace on da other side"/
beat his ass down and hit him wit my fuckin nine/
kept beatin him and then a cop came, oh shit,outa time/
i got my ass out there and dats how i wrote dis rhyme/
some people say i got a god damn fuckin sickness/
you think im sick?my god damn enemy is dickless/
his ass best say hes sorry when he come back/
or my rhymes will eat his ass up like a snack/
now let me tell yall-i allways got my glock at side/
and i also got a big ass pimpin ride/
i smoke weed,kill,steal,and speed/
and wait, did i mention weed/
and im a fuckin drug addict/
gettin good grades,i lack-at-it/
if i could murder someone, then i would/
when they found out i wanted to be a rapper, they mis understood/
and dats why i fuckin dissed every one of those faggots/
stomped on them and fucked them up like fuckin maggots/
and thats why im fucked up in da head/
and then it all started to fuckin bled/
(chorus)
cuz i got a fucked up life but im an ill emcee/
dont fuck wit me, i wont sign now peace treaty/
i jus rap to get shit up off my fuckin back/
doin it wit dis new motherfuckin track/
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Old 05-07-04, 07:53 PM   #2
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It was ok kinda played out rhymes though

5.3/10
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Old 05-07-04, 08:14 PM   #3
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yea....its really old actually...i wrote it like a year or two ago
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Old 05-07-04, 10:43 PM   #4
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its pretty good.maybe you could made a longer verse,but pretty good.6/10
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