Aiight da lowdown

10 lines
no d/r, crew, or hate votes
No feedin (if ya wanna feed go to MCDonalds)
5 to win, 3 is a ko
Check In and I'll check in after you
Ryhmes due 24 hours after checkin

Peace and Props

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Aiight I'll check in and spit but I'm at work. I'll spit with 12 hours

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Aiight here we go off da dome

Ya new here, like a baby, and you be throwin a fit//1
Comming straight from the horses ass is the only way ya rhymes are hot shit//2
Ya like a mutt on the street, I be puttin you down//3
Like a "circus" in da "swamp", I be "merc'in this clown"//4*
Like midgets with no hands reachin for street lamps, you can't touch this//5
Ma rhymes are like bullets, they make you "Move" like "Ludacris//6
Like Old ladies at Bingo, all you do is "babble-on" (Babylon)//7
Like at birthday parties when the pony dies, ya rhymes are no fun//8
So unlike the "New Kids on THe Block" you ain't "hangin tough"//9
I beat you like a drunk husband, like "J. Lo" you've had "Enough"//10

*-Mercky water in swamps

Aiight that took me 2 minutes.

Peace and Props

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p.s. Baby in the first line is a play on babylon if you didn;t know

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whats good.........

^look^ HellonEarth is sick...but i laugh cause thats a con....
Yo HellonEarth is back for all you playa's at Fuckin' Faggots.com....
by your name i can tell your a bitch...so you belong on your Knee's...
and your Initials explain it clearly...cause your just another H...O...E...
and i'm tired of all these newbs......with wack ass played spits.....
but that line about hot shit was good...back when i use to say it....
See fam its HellonEarth...Yeah....but hell musta froze ova...
cause he only battles newbs....check his sig...he KO'd Lyrical Solja!...(WOW!)
yo I think he's wack!......but thats just one of my many hunches....
he reminds me of boxing analyst's how he alway's explain'n his punches...

one love......


DQ'ed... rules say no feeding
-strobe

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oh yeah i forgott to check in.......................

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good job to both of you!!!

im not voting, but in my honest opinion...babylon was much hotter. no, its not 'cuz he's in my crew. he just spit fire for a quick ass battle.

nice shit hell.......stay up pimpin'. one.

s.v............c.s.

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R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.

"but that line about hot shit was good..."

Do you know what feedin is? Cuz you seem to be doing it throughout the whole verse. I'm gonna check the rules on this one....

anyway Uppin fer votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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both ok battles, but hell on earth u used to many mettas, try mixin round kk, n babilon yours was ok ya structure was ok n i think u just took this one man, so my vote goes to babylon

aaight, This was a good battle,
Hell- I was feelin ya HOT SHIT line, that shit was funny, kinda long though...But Blackwell is right, You should try n switch it up, the structure you had with meta after meta, made it hare to catch a flow....I think this verse Definatley had better metaz than when u battled me...not a bad drop

Bab- I liked ya structure and ya Faggots.com line had me rollin...The variety was better on this one... Over all I think it was just a better drop...
good battle

Vote=Bab

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yo yo yo yo yo Babylon can "babble-on"like old ladies at bingo all he wants
just a dabble of the babble seemed to have ya rattled and imma explain my shit before you to the mods and tattle this dude didn t vote please disqualify well after reading this it was a decent battle but the babbbbbbb took it to ya content rymeflow punches oh my word that shit had me laughin but hell-is decent but man please leave out the line-1 line-2 bs and dont explain we already see ur a newbe with the small post size keep strivin tho holmes and keep haten!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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yo that hot shit line wasnt no feed.........

it was a personal i didnt mean for it to be a feed.......

so i hope you dont try an DQ me just cause your losein' right now..........

one love.........

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