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Old 05-03-04, 11:30 PM   #1
Xpiration D8
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Treat u right

IP: 3240 794D

Title: Gon treat you right.
Artist(s): Xpiration D8 feat Alisa Depari

Chorus: I'm gon treat you right
Come on spend the night
You wanna be my lady
Cuz I aint shady
This is from the heart
Dont tear this apart
You have my soul 2 soul
Now you're in control
Here lemme make the beat drop
Gonna make ya heart stop
This my words to you tonight
Who gon treat you right.


Alisa: Who's gon treat me right?
MC: I'm gon treat you right
Alisa: Who's gonna spend the night?
MC: I'm gon spend the night
Alisa: Boy dont be shady
MC: Girl ya talkin crazy, Where'd you hear that stuff?
Alisa: Boy I think I had enough
MC: Why you frontin for?
Alisa: Jus walk out the door, I dont want no more
MC: Girl why you sayin that for?
Alisa: Boy jus say goodbye
MC: Girl open up them eyes, I aint like them guys
Alisa: Take ya stuff and rise...up on outta here...your not worth my tears
MC: Girl this is what i fear...C'mon you know I care
Alisa: Now whats all this about?
MC: Girl c'mon lets talk about, you and me three years
Alisa: Boy they filled with tears, this is what i fear.
MC: Girl jus come over here, I jus want you near
Alisa: Boy Im outta here


This world is full of sorrow and full of death, But will I make it tommorrow with my last breath, My conscience eating at me cause im not with you, If two becomes one then where are you. My heart is filled with sadness and sometimes pain and without you in my life boo all i hear is the rain, I cry out to you in the middle of the night, and i look to my side and hold my pillow tight. Wondering where you are and where you'd stay but dont worry girl cause im around the way. I'm hoping you are warm and content in your soul, Dont let the little things bother you make you outta control. For I am here jus like the lord, Slashing away temptation like King Arthurs sword. When I first met you we didnt get along, Who wouldve thought we'd last this long. Girl if you are not happy with me please dont stay, Cause if you are scared that I'd hurt you Im not that way. All the girls before were tricks and whores, Thats why Im with you and I like you more. Even brought you to that little store, bag of chips and visions of the past, Dont worry baby girl I dont move in too fast.
Alisa: Who's gon treat me right?
MC: I'm gon treat you right
Alisa: Who's gonna spend the night?
MC: I'm gon spend the night
Alisa: Boy dont be shady
MC: Girl ya talkin crazy, Where'd you hear that stuff?
Alisa: Boy I think I had enough
MC: Why you frontin for?
Alisa: Jus walk out the door, I dont want no more
MC: Girl why you sayin that for?
Alisa: Boy jus say goodbye
MC: Girl open up them eyes, I aint like them guys
Alisa: Take ya stuff and rise...up on outta here...your not worth my tears
MC: Girl this is what i fear...C'mon you know I care
Alisa: Now whats all this about?
MC: Girl c'mon lets talk about, you and me three years
Alisa: Boy they filled with tears, this is what i fear.
MC: Girl jus come over here, I jus want you near
Alisa: Boy Im outta here

Give ya momma a chance and maybe she'll prove, that her love for you might force you to move back so you can see me one more time, I'll count my blessings never take for granted that your mine. Your smile, your eyes all incredible, that ass those thighs I wish were edible. You are sweet beautiful and you can ride with me, If you promise that you will take no others side but me. Cause I am dedicated jus ask ya sister she knows, I dont love no bitches and I dont love no hoes, And I wont touch them feet girl or them toes, I dont like that shit skeeves you out I know. Ya man before dont know what he missing, But he prob wants ya ass back pray to god aint listening, You were like the gift from above that i was wishin. I had god workin overtime on this mission. So jus listen shorty this wont take long I aint like the others and I wont do you wrong, So let ya guards down and let me in for I dont look at you as a prize that I win. This song is over no more to be said, But dont get too happy dont soup ya head. I'm jus playin girl ya know I care. So jus gimme a kiss and come over here.
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Old 05-09-04, 02:10 AM   #2
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ta chorus needs a lot of work n so do ya verses, u lackin vocab n structure, u should write in bars it helps pople read it better, but to tell ya tha truth i wasnt really feelin the song
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