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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Merk.Inc 4 44.44%
Real Thorough 5 55.56%
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Old 05-08-04, 05:23 PM   #1
Real Thorough
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From: Detroit, home of what we feel!
Real Thorough vs Merk.Inc

IP: 6C51 8654

10-20 lines
No feeding*
No biting
No freeposting
No hating
Drop within the hour.
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Old 05-08-04, 06:01 PM   #2
Real Thorough
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From: Detroit, home of what we feel!
IP: 6C51 8654

Its Like Doctors After A Bad case of Amnesia...Leave Merk needing New-Practice/
Merk trying to aproaches with Swrewd-Tactics/
Like 'Failing Martial Artists'...No way this Foo-Passes!!(Fool...Foo as in Kung Fu)/
Cuz I got Heat That 'Seperates The Boys From The Gurls' Like Elementary 'School-Dances'!!!..*(ha)//
After this battle ima be like 'Tramps at the Dump'...Ima Stick-to-recks/
Your like Bad water polo Games, You dont get nuttin wit ya Flow In-The-Net/
Real Slit-ya-neck N take the 'Title Out Ya Sig' Like Fuckin 'Conterfit Cigarettes'!!//
Like Massive Flinestone Fans, I’ll Crash ya Walls Till you Got Nuttin but 'Rubble-To-See/
Like 'Rasicm in Classes'...i hope its not 'Trouble,-You-Seek!!..(HA...Think)/
Real Leave this fuck-in-defeat, not knowin nuthin-bout-heat/
Last time i noticed W-C-W...They were shut down by W-W-E!!!!(OMG)**//
Real put more hate to U.S.A(You Essa) Than Saddam Housain after Bombing-In-Iraq/
Every punch you droppin-isa-wack/
Take ya seat and vomit-ina-bag, ill leave ya Body-ina-cast/
Diss take a torch to The champ, this like Pakistani Prayers!! Cuz im leavin 'Omin-On-the-Mat'!!(Amen)..//

Just postin again.
You turn!
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Old 05-08-04, 07:06 PM   #3
Real Thorough
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From: Detroit, home of what we feel!
IP: 6C51 8654

Ayo man you gone drop or what cuz, dont let this fade.
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Old 05-08-04, 07:10 PM   #4
Merk.Inc
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IP: B2D8 6E11

Yo... check it..
How the hell u suppose to feed doin a blind spit?/ (he said no feedin)
U could be 'Thoroughly bred' and still couldnt be 'my bitch'/ (his name is Real Thorough)
Welcome to Merk incorporated and ur the first victim/
Ur rhymes couldnt be 'sick' if u actually 'licked em'/
Dogg yo rap up there look like some pre written shit/
But on the other hand the rap looks a lil pre bitten. bitch/
Haha you really thought i was a n00b and this was an ez battle/
but im bout to bust ya bladder, and penalize u wit a paddle/
I dun see how u made it into lyrical destruction/
when my flow got u under abduction, but im still under construction/
like broken bones ill leave u dead wit a concussion/
dis wasnt a battle, it was merely a poetry discussion/
the way u rap, i thought u was actually 'enchanting'/
The only way u could 'top' me is wit rap 'enhancements'/
Ur style is outplayed, and ur punches cant 'connect'/
put ur rhymes in front of a mirror, and they still wouldnt 'reflect'/

ight.. there ya go
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Old 05-08-04, 07:47 PM   #5
Merk.Inc
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Uppin fo votes..
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Old 05-08-04, 07:51 PM   #6
Real Thorough
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From: Detroit, home of what we feel!
IP: 6C51 8654

LOL, omg, that was funny, niggig noob or not, I'wn give a fuck you lucky I aint throw stones atcha ass, (I'l laughin B) Lets get some votes yall
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Old 05-08-04, 08:17 PM   #7
lyrical KILLAH
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WOW! SOMEONE NEEDS TO PICK THIS DUDE UP QUICK

MERK.INC
Dogg yo rap up there look like some pre written shit/
But on the other hand the rap looks a lil pre bitten. bitch/
-NICE PUNCH

Ur style is outplayed, and ur punches cant 'connect'/
put ur rhymes in front of a mirror, and they still wouldnt 'reflect'/
-HOT LINE NIGGA U ON FIRE


REAL
Like 'Failing Martial Artists'...No way this Foo-Passes!!(Fool...Foo as in Kung Fu)/
Cuz I got Heat That 'Seperates The Boys From The Gurls' Like Elementary 'School-Dances'!!!..*(ha)//
-THEY HAVE DANCES????????

Real Slit-ya-neck N take the 'Title Out Ya Sig' Like Fuckin 'Conterfit Cigarettes'!!//
Like Massive Flinestone Fans, I’ll Crash ya Walls Till you Got Nuttin but 'Rubble-To-See/
-HE HAS A SIG???


IIGHT I THINK MERK,MERKED THIS DUDE HE JUST RIPPED HIM FROM THE BEGINING TO THE END HIS FLOW AND PUNCHES WERE BETTER SO MERK.INC
GETS MY VOTE
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Old 05-08-04, 09:43 PM   #8
Merk.Inc
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Uppin for votes ^^ favor will be returned ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Old 05-08-04, 10:44 PM   #9
Merk.Inc
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Uppin for more votes.. favor will be returned** ^^
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Old 05-08-04, 11:54 PM   #10
Merk.Inc
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Omg uppin for more honest votes.. vote nikka favor will be returned
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Old 05-09-04, 02:07 AM   #11
Merk.Inc
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Uppin fo more votes ^^ honest ones
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Old 05-09-04, 01:53 PM   #12
Merk.Inc
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Ight uppin for vots ^^ dont sleep on this hot battle
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Old 05-09-04, 04:17 PM   #13
Replay
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damn kid you did it again (Merk inc.) real thorought it was cool but then punches were just put in there and they didn't fit. Merk inc i likeed the whole damn thing and ain't gonna do a best line.
Merk inc. 8/10
Real thorought 7/10
real close
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Old 05-09-04, 07:02 PM   #14
Merk.Inc
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Uppin for honest votes dogg... ^^ favor will be returned
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Old 05-09-04, 07:26 PM   #15
shadow
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
IP: AAF4 20CB

Its Like Doctors After A Bad case of Amnesia...Leave Merk needing New-Practice/
Merk trying to aproaches with Swrewd-Tactics/
Like 'Failing Martial Artists'...No way this Foo-Passes!!(Fool...Foo as in Kung Fu)/
Cuz I got Heat That 'Seperates The Boys From The Gurls' Like Elementary 'School-Dances'!!!..*(ha)//
After this battle ima be like 'Tramps at the Dump'...Ima Stick-to-recks/
Your like Bad water polo Games, You dont get nuttin wit ya Flow In-The-Net/
Real Slit-ya-neck N take the 'Title Out Ya Sig' Like Fuckin 'Conterfit Cigarettes'!!//
Like Massive Flinestone Fans, I’ll Crash ya Walls Till you Got Nuttin but 'Rubble-To-See/
Like 'Rasicm in Classes'...i hope its not 'Trouble,-You-Seek!!..(HA...Think)/
Real Leave this fuck-in-defeat, not knowin nuthin-bout-heat/
Last time i noticed W-C-W...They were shut down by W-W-E!!!!(OMG)**//
Real put more hate to U.S.A(You Essa) Than Saddam Housain after Bombing-In-Iraq/
Every punch you droppin-isa-wack/
Take ya seat and vomit-ina-bag, ill leave ya Body-ina-cast/
Diss take a torch to The champ, this like Pakistani Prayers!! Cuz im leavin 'Omin-On-the-Mat'!!(Amen)..//
^^^ok opener, terrible closer bad structure, ok punches
real thourough overaall *7* you need to eleavte more and work on the structure
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How the hell u suppose to feed doin a blind spit?/ (he said no feedin)
U could be 'Thoroughly bred' and still couldnt be 'my bitch'/ (his name is Real Thorough)
Welcome to Merk incorporated and ur the first victim/
Ur rhymes couldnt be 'sick' if u actually 'licked em'/
Dogg yo rap up there look like some pre written shit/
But on the other hand the rap looks a lil pre bitten. bitch/
Haha you really thought i was a n00b and this was an ez battle/
but im bout to bust ya bladder, and penalize u wit a paddle/
I dun see how u made it into lyrical destruction/
when my flow got u under abduction, but im still under construction/
like broken bones ill leave u dead wit a concussion/
dis wasnt a battle, it was merely a poetry discussion/
the way u rap, i thought u was actually 'enchanting'/
The only way u could 'top' me is wit rap 'enhancements'/
Ur style is outplayed, and ur punches cant 'connect'/
put ur rhymes in front of a mirror, and they still wouldnt 'reflect'/
^^ nice opener ok closer, good punches great flow ok sytrcuture
keep elevatin though aight?nice job i was feelin merks verse more
so my vote / merk inc.
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