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ayo mc creaper is the new rap battle creeper/
I cut you up deeper to slay the grim reeper/
this guy hasn't shit against me. im gonna fade you away like an eraser/
the eraser would measure your dick, which is small the size of 10 milimetres/
these lyrics are chopping wat ya sayin, pretending n intending to choke you/
your mouth speach get's broken down, till you can't even rap my name/
my names popa doc im here to rip your cock, im gonna make your heart stop/
i'll coppase you like you've had an astroid hit you, thats just launched that an't stoping/
my head hasn't got any room for you fat ass wannabe, no chance past my line with your vunerability/
the truth is your laughable, cuz your shit is so unrelyable, i say this peacefully to throw your shit in space once again forcefully/

Heart ARRESTIN(cardiac) so your unable to come with up
"shit" like INDIGESTION,WRECKIN-CONTESTANTS
with deadly WEAPONS while RECESSIN- AGGRESSION..!!!


.:Witty:.
..walk into the *hall of glory* until it curves and 'turns-to-ya-fate'..
..testin this GOD will get you *dealt proper* and 'served-on-a-plate'..
steppin to this chump folk..mah special weapon will 'pump-jokes'..
ill slice ya stomach,crack ya ribs,and use ya intestines as 'jump-ropes'..
..few has survived..better yet yall know wat i'd do-to-this-guy..
..dude-is-derived,reachin 'beyond ya vision' when taking out the 'routes-
of-ya-eyes'...
..Poppa Doc is *natural to drop off* like FALLing 'leaves-in-the-automn'..
..you have no relation to *treasure chest* accept your
both 'retreived-at-the-bottom'..!!
..Poppa doc can only suck, like 'sluts paralyzed' from the neck-down...
strangle you with cable wires, so maybe Doc lines can
connect-now!...!!

Popa Doc that cock thing sounded gay to me. Bitz and pieces of your verse wuz BOOTY and some wuz alright. But you didnt show me anything good enough to win.

But MC Reaper wow what can i say besidez BITTEN? ill get the link in a minute.
steppin to this chump folk..mah special weapon will 'pump-jokes'..
ill slice ya stomach,crack ya ribs,and use ya intestines as 'jump-ropes'..
^^^i know that line wuz bitten
but ill see

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Wow! Bitten, this is amazing, niggihz just come on and hate hate hate, bitch if you gone come into a battle then vote, shyt, puusy ass niggihz.

Anyways ayo this battle was onesided though.
punches - Reaper
Structure - Almost a tie but Reaper stuck it out
Meta's - reaper
Rhyme Scheme - Reaper
Word Play - reaper.
Yall know who the vote goes to.

Mc's Reaper obviously had better multis and a better flow in my opinion. Only problem was some of his metaphors were stretched a little too much. I really liked:
"Poppa doc can only suck, like 'sluts paralyzed' from the neck-down..."

That was a nice line.

Popa doc just had generic shit about dude's dick being small and even when he got personal the pucnhes weren't that strong (his opener for example.) Flow was ok, but I think Mc's was a little better.

All in all a close battle, but I've gotta give my vote to Mc's Reaper.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123621

I'm rallying for votes, vote people vote, I'll return the fav.

OMG..another lop-sided battle

MC gets this for 4 reasons

#1...his verse had way better structure and flow
#2...his verse actually rhymed
#3...his punches were actually creative
#4...he landed more hits than Pops

nuff said

Vote: MC

Thanks for the honest vote, I appre. that, more votes please all I need is one more, it'll come a time when this is you and you'll have me to pay you back from this vote.

I voted on this battle, would you mind returning the favor and vote on this:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123621

ok i gotta agree with the other guys this was a 1 sided battle reaper merked this guy easily with better punches and a better flow all in the verse was just so much better

my vote reaper

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