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05-14-04, 12:46 PM
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Greatest Fear
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Ever held a crystal to a natural light? Beauty nearly unable to describe... The same feeling brought forth from inside ...that exact instant I met her eyes Starts as always, a flirty glance here or there Scared that it would be construed as cold stares Then there comes a time, approached and spoke Hope for the best, with a lump in my throat Leads to notes passed, of how I miss you Constantly, and how I long to again kiss you And through it all, something makes it so hard To accept three people hold a place in you heart Apart from what logic says, I stay and wait for the best Yet hate all this weight placed on my chest If I left would it matter, would you care if I go? I dont know... but I hope thats not so Although, regardless, I'll stay and jump at the chance To someday, be the focus of your plans Because when I hold your hands, and lay embraced Kissing you, I know how sweet ambrosia must taste And I hate that I may be set up for my greatest fear To give my heart to someone and have all that disappear But here... have my heart and all thats good left inside And hopefully all these tears that I've cried... ...will lead to this picture of perfection at my side I know you're confused... ..You know at times I feel used Pessimistic thoughts kill me... ...So at some time I hope you see That whoever you choose... ...I do and always will, be in love with you
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05-14-04, 01:19 PM
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IP: 6DCA 81D9
Feedback?
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05-14-04, 01:37 PM
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Anyone?
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05-14-04, 08:30 PM
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Anything that has a resemblence to intelligence is slept upon here
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05-14-04, 08:37 PM
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Miss Me?
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there ya go.....
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05-14-04, 08:38 PM
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^^^
Thank you... I'm glad atleast someone reads here
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05-14-04, 08:50 PM
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You Love My Style.
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Umm. This was on point, Well done. Creative, Emotions was deep in this piece. Overall had to say Well done.
Check Mine. MasterMind
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05-14-04, 10:07 PM
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tight man, tight. keep spittin that intelligenyt shit, some peeps appreciate. go check some of my shit if u want.
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05-14-04, 10:09 PM
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05-15-04, 01:24 PM
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Up.
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05-15-04, 09:17 PM
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Upping
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05-15-04, 09:35 PM
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Hi Chrit.
Was alright i aint a big fan of the love letter type thing but u showed good emotions thru this and your flow was constant throughout, maybe ur imagery could have shown more and it was too direct for my taste. dropsmore.
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06-02-04, 01:09 PM
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(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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it was ok but it def needed some major work keep elevatin.......................................... .....
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