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crew votes allowed cuz this is a spot for H.S
no d/r hate votes
first to 5 wins
verse due in 1 hour

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Da roc in the building,iight man let do this fag bvoy lol

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aiight heres a lil something from this "fag-boy" then



ya goin against an out of order vending machine that devoures dimes//
you thought you was electrifying until i pulled down ya power lines//
you're shell toes, im uptown's, you're played out...its blatant//
but either way I >>Always Diss this Ignorant Dude in Any Situation//
been dope, get off my "JOHNSON" i'm not givin u my "MAGIC" hoe//
had to piss in his baseball mit, so this bitch could catch the flow//
placin poprocks on ya nerves so you pop-lock to my words//
elevate so quick and sick i rock spots with the birds..//
ya heard....i wet more kids on the net then barely 18 pornos//
killa gotta be kidding me...this verse isn't delivery its digourno//

20 min key

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flow you dont make "cents"..even after "hittin the lottery"//
and ya "text" rhymes are more "sorry" then a "written-apology"/
It stays the same duke, like “photos of ex girls” I’ll rip you out the frame dude//
R.S is a joke…change your name to lonely rapper cuz no crew wants you//
Kid “you aint got shit” like the last time we met…go and check ya d/r votes//
Cause the personals in my verse having you “seeing more stars” than telescopes
'Seep-through-necks' you cant hurt my chest cuz ill defeat ya next//
if you had fat women typin for you, you couldn't spit 'da-seat-full-text'//
im sick wit it...and them lines you got dont make sense like tall midgets//
i spit raw sickness...like phone numbers on movies you stay gettin false digits//

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killakam came out with this no no doubt. He had more rhyming and his structure was gret. and his ending put it all to shame well my vote goes to killa.
oh yea and check on this battle so it can close up iight.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127382

Fami do not want no d/r votes on here so stop doing those if u really think i won exlpain it more then u didi iight

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Upping this battle come on peopel put some votes in here

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Yo Its Like Flow Intelligent Jus Gave up he didint even Rhyme on sum lines

KillaCamFlow You're Shit Was Nice and i give u props Flow intelligent was nice 2


Break Down

KillaCamFlow

flow 8/10
Rhymes 7/10
Punches 7/10
Structure 7/10
Wordplay8/10
Vocab 6/10
43/60

Flow Intelligent

Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Punches 6/10
Structure 7/10
Wordplay 7/10
Vocab 6/10
39/60

V/KillaCamFlow

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nice hate or d/r vote and all cuz every single line rhymed but nice try ill let it stay

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Hey u can not say nothing to me i was sleeping you know i got school

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ya goin against an out of order vending machine that devoures dimes//
you thought you was electrifying until i pulled down ya power lines//
7...pretty clever meta, nice opener!!
you're shell toes, im uptown's, you're played out...its blatant//
but either way I >>Always Diss this Ignorant Dude in Any Situation//
9...hott 2nd line, nicrly done with the ADIDAS!!
been dope, get off my "JOHNSON" i'm not givin u my "MAGIC" hoe//
had to piss in his baseball mit, so this bitch could catch the flow//
7...clever again, nice wordplay!!
placin poprocks on ya nerves so you pop-lock to my words//
elevate so quick and sick i rock spots with the birds..//
6...pretty weak, an aight small multi!!
ya heard....i wet more kids on the net then barely 18 pornos//
killa gotta be kidding me...this verse isn't delivery its digourno//
7...gud closer!!


flow you dont make "cents"..even after "hittin the lottery"//
and ya "text" rhymes are more "sorry" then a "written-apology"/
7...gud opener, but yo drop the "" around ure punchlines and drop the //.
It stays the same duke, like “photos of ex girls” I’ll rip you out the frame dude//
R.S is a joke…change your name to lonely rapper cuz no crew wants you//
5...weak man, fake personal cuz he in the H.S. crew!!
Kid “you aint got shit” like the last time we met…go and check ya d/r votes//
Cause the personals in my verse having you “seeing more stars” than telescopes
6...gud line but pretty stretched!!
'Seep-through-necks' you cant hurt my chest cuz ill defeat ya next//
if you had fat women typin for you, you couldn't spit 'da-seat-full-text'//
7...nice multi, gud wordplay!!
im sick wit it...and them lines you got dont make sense like tall midgets//
i spit raw sickness...like phone numbers on movies you stay gettin false digits//
7...nice closer!!

POINTS TOTALS
Flow Intelligent - 36/50
KillaCamFlow - 32/50

V/ - Flow Intelligent

Nice spits from both...flow u can come stronger than that cuz i've seen u do it. killacam, that was one of ure best drops i've seen and even tho u lost i still think u came strong and came close to winnin!! GUD DROPS!!

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Yo flowintelligent took this, it was close, but killa streched some lines so he could put in a personal which screwed up the flow

A'ight...in all honesty this was a very close battle. So close...Killa you surprised me. You have elevated a lot. Both had some nice punches, both had pretty decent flow...I think FlowIntel had it a lil' better on the structure tho. Perosnals were pretty even...very very sloe battle.

Vote- Flow Intelligent for slightly better punches.

No hate.

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punches:flow
flow:killa
wordplay:flow
structure:both
personals:flow
overall:flow

can you guys return tha fava tha links are on my sig

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