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05-18-04, 01:58 PM
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(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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here for the first time check it out
IP: B20F 67F7
this is my first spit on this thread so dont dis me 2 much im llokin for some feed back so i can elevate
im here to show these rookies how this shyt is done/ these kids soft as cookies fallin to my smokin gun/ travel to bitches blocks and let loose slugs/ thats the end of this lil pretty boy he got a holy mug/ thats the last time he eva gunna call himself thug/ yes im mean thats what im hear for/ violence is all my minds geared for/ you wanna hear more/ call me hova the way i make the crowd roar/ everytime man fuk the encore/ iight can i get some feed back on dis 1.............
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05-18-04, 02:45 PM
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thats all gd
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05-19-04, 09:05 AM
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(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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IP: 5C5F 906E
thynx baby yo nebody else wanna hit up dis man c'mon i need some feed back uppin.....................................
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05-19-04, 11:44 AM
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(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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IP: 5C5F 906E
uppin again............................................. .................................................. .
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05-19-04, 01:18 PM
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(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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IP: 5C5F 906E
uppin yo y wont nebody hit dis up................................................ ....................
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05-19-04, 01:38 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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ok u need 2 work on ur vocab multis and flow usin the same word 2 make shit rhyme is corny in my opinio ur new though so pretty good drop
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05-19-04, 01:47 PM
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(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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IP: 5C5F 906E
iight thynx for the feedback see thats all i want people lets keep it comin uppin.....................
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05-20-04, 08:49 AM
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(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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IP: 5C5F 906E
uppin for some more feedback.......................................... ..............................
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05-20-04, 09:48 AM
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IP: 40B2 4A8C
that was tight i liked ya 2nd line
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05-20-04, 11:48 AM
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(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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IP: B20F 67F7
iight thynx for the feedback uppin..............
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