you know the rules

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aight..this is my check in..imma spit in one hour..all i need is 10 min...but i'll take my tmie to fix it up and kill u wit it!!!

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aww shit nvm already my third battle sorry wait for one more vote on my
battle

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oh shit nevermind thought the max battles open was 2 my bad sorry
bout that

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w/e i'll just spit now I gtg


I don't give a fuck that your name surrounds other people
don't really want you seeing this battle so jump off a steeple
you surround a biter just by saying your fuckin' name
bitch you go around & around just like a board game
never going up tha rap game all you ever do is go down
this is a life or death situation and im wearing the surgical gown
for you losing guess what i'm seriously very gung-ho
you be left more bloodier than yourself having a menstrual flow
you maybe a girl but I won't hold back...
unless you fuck me and loan me some crack
you better put a bag on your face so you don't get called a hoe
in a party a pimp say get on your knees chickenhead give me sum mo
u be like hell no u ain't got no mo sperm i sucked u whole
tell us who won this battle and complete the poll...

no offense...... good luck

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here it iz..sorry i took so long..I thought u weren't gonna spit no more..so i waited..then saw it today

Lyrical Flames? He's nuthin but a lyrical stain//
stuck on da garbage list forever cuz of his lyrical name//
He has over 300 posts but still only two fucken wins//
Da only reason he won is cuz of all da d/ridin gays luvin him//
There's no one thats more really bi- cuz that really is you//
So ur shyt man, thast da truth..nuthin really ta prove//
Haha..if he in a group then he betta be leavin da crew//
Cuz they don't wanna have mc's that still watch winnie da pooh//
I'll have you easily dismantled like da way u were easily handled//
Raped by a 30 year old man daniel and his gay dad named randel//
how da hell can you get girls wen you a small dick resident//
Jst look who's in da pic of a size small condom box for evidence//
Da chance of you winnin this battle....
is like da chance of Clay Aken not bein gay//
So stop tryin ta beat me, quit rappin and have a nice day//

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uppin this ppl plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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yo don't sleep on this battle uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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i will vote as soon as i hit 20 posts....
flow-lyrical
vocab-lyrical
punches-lyrical
metas/similies-lyrical
personals- about even
finisher-lyrical
vote=lyrical.

nigga u dickridin^^^hahaha..my spit waz way better boy!!!uppin plz!!!

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Hmmm.. Actually I thought yall were very even in this battle. I thought yall had similar styles too. Niether one of you had a ill verse in my opinion, but they were both okay. Both of you had some good lines as well as some very played lines. Lines like these are played as fuck in my opinion:

you be left more bloodier than yourself having a menstrual flow

^^Everyone uses a line like that when battling girls, and it's so played.(Even tho I used a line similar to that in one of my battles..lol)

is like da chance of Clay Aken not bein gay//

^^This is just a corny line. Not original. And the little dick thing is as played as the menstrual shit.

Lyrical had a decent flow and his structure was good, and the same goes for Atmosphere. Niether one had really good punches, wordplay, or multi's. I also think that both verses were inconsistent going from this is pretty good to this is kinda weak. Overall, I thought Atmosphere had wittier and funnier personals and to me that's what decided the battle. Everything else was even.

VOTE: ATMOSPHERE

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uppin 4 votes!!!! cmon people need a shitload mo votes than this

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this battle was evnly matched, both of yall had the same everything...but the endin of lyricals verse i wasnt feelin much...it started gettin nursery style rhymin...atmosphere came more consistent wit his verse...so
vote=atmosphere

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well...I agree the same type of flos....punches where about the same but it was more of a broad spit..either way tho i felt the margin tipped in favor of atmosphere overall..

Vote: Atmosphere..

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