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Old 05-30-04, 08:25 PM   #1
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man ill tell u how i felt and how i feel like this kick back relax tuneout and kneel to this, the only thing that can save you is love, missin its impossible like baseball with out a glove, u gotta shove to get enough, be ruff and tough, shakespear said that but fuckit he was on crack, so disregard that fact, tune out and role a fat sack, some people say i think to deep but i realize that the shallow drown in their sleep, so i take the high road n head up the mountain in the jeep, this is just straight up weak.

just sittin here trippin straight high out my mind,
thinkin bout my life forwards in rewind,
tryin to figure out whats wrong, why am i blind,
bigger then before but i still missed the sign,
the opportunity was their but the effort wasn't,
its destiny's fault, ain't myn! Or Was it?
academicaly my intellagence is above par,
but my potential lacks undeniably by far,
been burned by life, on my hearts the scar,
been givin gifts, but still i ask for more,
trapped in my own prision, im sick and sore,
im gonna break out, dig a tunnel and run,
ain't gonna stop till i see the beauty of the Sun.





the top is just a fuckin wack thing. i was just fuckin around. give me some feedback.
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Old 05-30-04, 08:44 PM   #2
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hit this up
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Old 06-01-04, 11:56 AM   #3
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i wasnt feelin it it def needed some major improvement in ya flow and in ya word play and vocab keep elevatin...........
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