jus giv me some pointers

Peeps keep telling elevate my game Well I did, wats did next step, straight to fame/1

Da times cum for roop’s nomination next step da domination of diz rap game/2

Couple down da road if da name don’t ring a bell Your obviously not up on it, I can tell…/3

Destroying young kid’s hopes enjoying it as well, finest mc since tupac excelled/4

I wont stop spitting till I accomplice my goal, to be hitting every club until I’m out of control/5

Weird huh, one good track can change an emcee life, submitted three, now every boo wanna be my wife/6

My goal is every cuz to hear my hear my track, I don’t care how long it take as long as nobody think my verse’s wack/6

I try to meet everybody needs writin my rhymes diffenently so peeps feel I can rhyme gently or I can be as fancy as a Bently/7

Yo I came n meet da bar now I am goin to raise quite far, its goin take a Pac like emcee to reach diz level like of superstar/8

I never stop writtin cuz I now I’ll get rustly like some emcee’s n be forgotten, I wont stop cuz I know thurrs a lot of money out there like farmers new bout cotton/9

I neva get old cuz I always have such a high value such as gold, neva leave any peep out in da cold cuz u don’t know wat will happen when they’re uncontrolled/10

Peeps left me and these rhymes evolved in my head, I couldn’t take any long so I had to spit them out till I turn dead/11

Its crazy how a kid like me can have so much skill, I’ll explain it to u, let an mc chill n he will raise up fulfill all his will/12

Cant get enough of me nobody can…every since I began nobody wants to let me go like da death princess diane/13

Dats ok cuz I will keep everybody entertained, I don’t know how I, mainly tight rhymes, other then dat its all unexplained. /14

I hav been trained for so long. It my time for my image to be gained. After this I’ll be impossible to contain or even restrained/15

Nobody will ever forgot da impact I had. Its jus dat skill Roop been gifted wit, easily makin a hit...when he wants to without using any of his whit. He will accomplice wat others hav wanted When it comes to gifted he’s just haunted./16

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roop i think this is like the third thing of urs icve seen so for the 3rd time ima say elevate man get a better flow and up ur wordplay and for christ sake man use a multi atleast 1nce ok but keep tryin and keep elevatin.......

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uppin for some feedback

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Pretty good, just keep it up!!Work on creativity n flow a little though>>>