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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

yo this cat be fat as a rat have to knock his eye straight with a baseball bat
i shhot u down with a tech-9 my rymes be divine im the one roccafella want to sign.your rymes are as rusty as apiece of crusty bread the shit ure saying has already been said before or is this just urban folk lore u are a real bore im gonna snore coz ure making me tired u will get fired from your job then you will have to rob a bank your a fucking wank i knock u out with a wooden plank shoot u down with my AK u so FUCKING GAY i found out yesterDAY wen i saw u bumming a man while he was trying to catch a sun tan i need a can of gass an ouce of grass a shard of glass to make it through today wots that u say i aint dissed u enough well i take your momma up the muff it kinda rough and is tough she should polish it before i demolish it u make me sick as dick ure trying to lick a mns prick wots up cant get it up around woman ure homosexuality be booming so u are now rooming with a notorius gay im not homophobic but your gonna get a little costrophobic wen have ure gay gang bang and it was me who sang this song stop wearing that male thong i knock u around like ping pong

Yo first of all dog you aint shoot shit down,
just admit you got clowned,
and walk like a bitch and turn around,
I dont like you dog I neva have and I neva will,
your the bitcheyest bitch ive eva met wit no skill,
talkin bout "thong and ping pong",
your a poser thats been stated,
your a wack mcee thats been out dated,
you cant battle me again dog you wack styles faded,
and im proud to be the first to say,
all you talk about is that fag shit i think you want me to be gay,
and if thats the case,
everyone get your pens and pencils ready to kill this fuck face.

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Lookin for some votes come on people!!!!! VOTE VOTE VOTE


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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

pretty weak battle. lyricle had nice punchs and way better flow and structure. gavin dawg u need to DEFFINATLY work on ur flow and DEFFINATLY ur structure. otherwise ur spit was alright. u do need to elevate more though. my vote goes to lyricle for better flow and structer although gavins punches were pretty close

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

GAVIN I GIVE YOU THIS BATTLE B/C YOUR PUNCHES WERE BETTER. THE OTHER GUY WAS GOOD BUT NOT GREAT.RETURN THE FAVA:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123395

VOTE=GAVIN

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Yo we need some votes yall!!!!! VOTE VOTE VOTE

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Yo people vote for this shit were tied someone needs to win so please vote honestly!



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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

Because battles are about punches I'ma give this one to Gavin. BUT all-in-all these were both pretty weak, rhyming gay, day say bay?? that shit is weak, by the
way i must say Lyrical's verse was way better to ready cause of the structre and flow, Gavin you really need to get some bars in your shit, looks like your writing a novel no one wants to read that, it will be tought getting people to vote if you drop to long.

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

goes to lryics better flow and structure,i dont like reading bunched up words.

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yeah yeah im ill!

Gavin - iight spit man, you had good multi's but your flow was off and so was your structure.

Best Line - NONE

Worst Line - MOST OF YOUR VERSE

Lyric - iight spit man, you had a better flow.. and your punches were better.

Best Line - I dont like you dog I neva have and I neva will,
your the bitcheyest bitch ive eva met wit no skill,

Worst Line - and if thats the case,
everyone get your pens and pencils ready to kill this fuck face.

OVERALL - WEAK battle.. but I gotta vote for Lyric.. he had better flow and strutcure and his punches were better. Gavin you need to work on your flow man.. make your lines more like Lyric's.

VOTE - Lyric

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123755

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