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Old 05-25-04, 06:53 PM   #1
MADD HAtter81
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sum people call me fluke a fake a phony so what say to them is.....

ashes to ashes... dust to to dust/
shotgun to head chainsaw to guts//
im one of those guys if you turn ya back/
the only sound ya hear is the shells fallin from the gat//
they hit sidewalk you freeze for the moment/
then you suddenly tumble and collaspse to the pavement//
i walk down the streets wit bats wrapped in bandannas/
we'll bet ya ass down so bitch treat us wit manners//
i aint no fluke im realist illest and i spit the truth/
my soundwaves are gonna infect the youth//
oh waitta sec i am the youth of this planet/
but imma keep spittin till yall cant stand it//
or until you cant stand and give a damn for this hip hop/
got ya hood on lock and my lead rock will make ya hip pop//
and if you think cuz im a good child cuz im caucasan/
we'll all ya bitchs get ready fo my invasion//
it's gonna make the evilest get scared and run for the hills/
the world could be spinnin and i will stand still//
and thats the shit that makes me spit/
and roll wit the infamous chryme sindidcate
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Old 05-26-04, 09:06 AM   #3
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it was iight it could use a lil rhyme work and maybe a few multis but not to bad keep elevatin....................
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Old 05-26-04, 09:29 PM   #4
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aight u can work on dat a lil but it wasnt to bad some of ya lines didnt rhyme but stay up
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