Aight these are the rules;
15-20 lines
No crew h8 d/r or unexplained votes
Verses due in by 12 noon tomorrow or auto dq
U first as u called me out

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Yo im here to beat cats and put the Dog out/ This home-made gangsta' about to stop foamin and begin to spit the blood out/ couse Chi-wa-was wit no bark get hit with Mexican drop kicks/ I'll borito your ass with a newspaper for trying to learn new tricks/ and I've seen you spit, Dog aint about shit/ Im still wipin' the blood off his computer screen from the last time he got his ass whipped/ so I dont even have to spit, and everybody at your cubical from which your battlin from'll applaud me/ Im a pediatricion type nigga, feedin you lyrical supository/ I'll have you jumpin loops in hoops of burnin tires/ then take U for a walk, wait till u pee, and set your stream on fire/
Im a newbie, but I've been spittin since your mom could remember me/ back befor we had u and I slaped her for almost namin something so ugly after me/ U should be out makin RNB albums with that little nigga Cassedy/ from now on, everywere u go, u ask for me/ my style is blasphomy, lyrical catastrophy, with complex compositions like Motzarts Hungarian Rapsody/ but you knockout by my punchlines, 5 mins redtime, I'll have you makin Head-Lines/ U can't Merk the god of Murcury, I was born from ash/ My nutt on your girls chest is more entertain' then a soccer team in a plane crash/

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

Oh my god what the hell was that shit ok my turn here we go...

(Verse)
This guy has got a hidden eyedentity...im sure he's only eight/
Coz that aint spittin dawg i'd say that was more premeture ejactulate/
Wait...this is ur first battle 'eye', should be glad i popped ur cherry/
But ima fill u wit hot spots like Strike it lucky...u know this shits scary/
1st battle for this Mexicano wanna be Soprano u aint a superstar/
The only 'wonder' on u is the shit on ur chest...oh thats a bra/
Hey this chi-wa-wa (me) got more bark than this Jermaine Depri wanna be/
But u bite more than the peeps in this thread come n see /
U took a crash course in rap...and crashed the bars/
The structure u gots wack...but its a shame u are what you are/
We could've been chums Eye but u think u fly for a white guy/
Well ima have to introduce you to a new way to die/
U knew losin to me would make front page on the NY times/
Gotta thank u ur right
Stop gamblin ur life on battles dawg u know u'll lose so keep them dimes/

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Uppin this shit...................................

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Uping some votes...

Uping this battle people !!!

Uppin this peeps..................................

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FLOW & STRUCTURE
Flow falls in with structure and both y'all had a flow goin on but i say Mad Dog gets it cuz eye man ure lines were stretched to fuck playa. Mad Dog stretched his a little but not as much and that made it a little easier for me to get into his spit, so i was feelin him more there.
PUNCHES & PERSONALS
eye had some nice punches in his spit if u can see them and maybe one personal or two i don't know. but he lacked creativity , he was usin some played out lines and his wordplay was just too basic. Mad Dog, u werent much better but u had some personals straight off the mark. ure punches were average power but cinsistent enough to beat ure opponent. u lacked in creativity to and both y'all need to beef up ure punches and try out some more complex wordplay.

OVERALL
basically those two categories are the main focus points of a battle and based on that Mad Dog takes the battle hands down. he came that little bit stronger with his punches and his flow was there to, i was just feelin him more in his spit!!

V/ - Mad Dog

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eye - damn your structure was whack - DEFINE YA LINES SON
that was vERY hard to read ya know

that verse itself was ok tho, these were ok:-

Yo im here to beat cats and put the Dog out/
This home-made gangsta' about to stop foamin and begin to spit the blood out/
couse Chi-wa-was wit no bark get hit with Mexican drop kicks/
I'll borito your ass with a newspaper for trying to learn new tricks/
and I've seen you spit, Dog aint about shit/
Im still wipin' the blood off his computer screen from the last time he got his ass whipped/

very average tho, lil to no wordplay

DOg - stucture was fine, easy to read i like this

U took a crash course in rap...and crashed the bars/
The structure u gots wack...but its a shame u are what you are/

very nice

We could've been chums Eye but u think u fly for a white guy/
Well ima have to introduce you to a new way to die/

so was this

v/ mad dog

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Yo im here to beat cats and put the Dog out/ This home-made gangsta' about to stop foamin and begin to spit the blood out/ couse Chi-wa-was wit no bark get hit with Mexican drop kicks/ I'll borito your ass with a newspaper for trying

^^ where do the lines end...decent...but i don't like the structure


This guy has got a hidden eyedentity...im sure he's only eight/
Coz that aint spittin dawg i'd say that was more premeture ejactulate/

^^ better structure...good punch

my punchlines, 5 mins redtime, I'll have you makin Head-Lines/ U can't Merk the god of Murcury, I was born from ash/ My nutt on your girls chest is more entertain' then a soccer team in a plane crash/

^^^ decent...but its not hitting hard

We could've been chums Eye but u think u fly for a white guy/
Well ima have to introduce you to a new way to die/
U knew losin to me would make front page on the NY times/
Gotta thank u ur right

^^^ decent closer...not hard hitting..but at least its aimed at him


Vote: Mad Dog...better structure..punches

Uping some votes !!!

Uppin.............................................

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PUNCHEs=Mad Dog
FLOW=Mad Dog
Personals=ED
Srtucture=Mad Dog

Vote=Mad Dogg

He Gets Thiz Bcuz Flow Structure And Punches...E-D Just Work On Ya Pucnhes And Flow

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