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aiight bra. checkin in. do i go first or do u go first. thats all i need to know and its done from there.

u go first

im new wit this spit and i aint ready to quit, im ready to up my numbers and make u eat shit/
make u eat cum, make u choke on dick, and i aint takin out ya mouth till u swallow all of it/
cause this is like a new begning for the both of us, mines my career and ur is endin like a group that broke up/
so tell your whole crew to do what they supposed to do, thats work the corner and be ho's like i was ownin you/
tell ur johns five for a suck and ten for a fuck, cause u cheap nigga, now give me my buck/
and dont try ya luck, cause you'll end up stuck, like a dick in ur ass, its in a rut/
while, me, i'm totally insane, but u like jigga called nas, LAME!!/
and u dont be flawnin pac, like u know makavelli, cause that shit aint right, cause the closest u come to him is whackavelli/
i'll piss on ya belly, jus like r. kelly, have u beggin for more, while im makin u hold my dick steady/
and u aint nuttin but a piece of cheap butt, or nigga, u a dick wit a loose nut!

aiight, there, i'm done. u spit bra. peace!

c'mon bra! where u at? i dont feel like waitin no 2 fuckin hours! hurry pleaze! in the mean time, people reply on my spit. i wanna know how to get better and all and how i was, so let me know. peace!

aiight man. u seriously r takin to long. jus post somethin quick. i dont feel like waitin 2 fuckin hours. peace!

Yo,your rhymes are just plain and fake/
So,I can not free againist becuase im 100% Black and im still MADE tho/
You a bum ass nigga go read something u hooked on PHOENIX nigga/
Thats why u leave in a fucking little ass cottage/
Yo tell the truth is ur mom still Abusin/,
The fact that ur rhymes are just dumb and mine just Confusion/
Why is u even on the Rb go and read a Book/
You not a vet or a Known perosn all u is a Rook/
You can relate me to Ups because im quick to make nigga Rest,
Im puttin 2 barz in the back of you and the next 1 in to ya Chest/
My rhymes are gonna pump ya brakes like NESS off Da band/

Done!

People, its time to vote. dont sleep on this battle.

i need votes on thisshit. please check this out. dont sleep on this people. peace!

vote goes to met a 4 because....

his verse was better in every aspect. he had the better flow multis, wordplay but ironically not that many metas. just the better verse though

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Aight...honest Vote.
I'mma have to go with Met on this on. Killa ya first 4 lines didn't even rhyme whats up wit that? Punches and personals was a little weak and you need to elevate ya vocab some. Met-A-4 u could elevate a little too, ya punches were marginal but I liked ya flow a little better.

Vote Met-A-4

Return tha favor and drop a honest vote on my battle!!!

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125019

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CHECK THIS OUT IN OPEN MIC...NEED FEEDBACK
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135097

LETS GO!!!!!!!!!!

lets close this poll and get some votes on here. i want to see the outcome, so please people don't sleep on this 1. peace!

met a 4 confusing verse butt whatever you were sayin was way better than cam's. to hold that name u must be able to spit fire both cam and met a 4. yall lil nigg need to step up. killcam your verse was not to good. i've seen to write better shit, step it up. meta4 youerverse was good better punches and personals. return the fava:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125523

vot=meta4

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

can we up this shit. please! i wanna close this shit. lata!