Okay...

This bitch will get his ass merked for talking shit likes he is good....

RULES....
10 Lines..nothing more nothing less
No feeding
No biting
No d/r
No crew votes
No hate votes
Due: 1 hour after check in...should be long enough for you....

I will check in after you...

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

NO King Solo,Unholy Wun,or Liqour of tears votes.

okay...checked in.....that counts as ur check in.....blacklist them so they cant vote....it dont matter....ur still gonna lose....

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

check in as well

y u do that K-Trin, i was gonna vote 4 u...lmao!!!

sorry 4 freepostin L.I.

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Yo , Bitch You call yourself L.I. , but skill is something you'd never run by./
You been jerking off some much,your palm look like it been dipped in hand dye/
I bust your lip so bad that it turns red and you get mistaken for Krusty the clown/
Your mom the talk-of-the-town,cause she got on L.I. and jump up-and-down/
Why you got nothing in your profile except for that you strike fear in everyone?/
You as scary as Gary Colemon with a spray gun full of cum from L.I.'s little "bun"/
You could be Niaguria,but I'd be Angel,you could be Obie,but I'd be Eminem/
U the biggest peice of shit to come out of a clit since the song 'AM to PM"/
Ur like Matin Luther King but ain't got no dream,you like a wrestler without a ring/
U a dick urself,you masterbate by wrapping your hands around urself and rubbing/
U like to act big,but you small in many ways,for u,this must suck so bad/
You bout to die,date's today,and ya got a desease,it called "I fucked dad"/
hahahaha
1

Check it...

Why'd he even bother...

Little hesitant, i understand, i'd be be scared against me too...
Quit battlin, since instrumentals have better lines than you...
Acts like he won the award for best rookie, all he does is boast...
And when it came down to decisions, your wack ass got 0 votes...
Beating LoT, than king solo, finally me...this herbs absurd...
Already realized hes wack, thats why he has his name blurred...
His whole aspect in this is questionable, why did he even decide to rap...
And whats with his sig, didnt know Em needed help to be put on the map...
Remember this, you need skill to win an award, and you have none...
Tried to convince you were sick, but in the end you were just shunned...

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

lol wtfffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff im blacklisted but um kid got ate up like low carb food by fat people

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^ even after it says if u dont understand dont vote


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breakdown:

k-trin:

Yo , Bitch You call yourself L.I. , but skill is something you'd never run by./
You been jerking off some much,your palm look like it been dipped in hand dye/
^^nice opener good punch 7/10
I bust your lip so bad that it turns red and you get mistaken for Krusty the clown/
Your mom the talk-of-the-town,cause she got on L.I. and jump up-and-down/
^^another nice punch 7/10
Why you got nothing in your profile except for that you strike fear in everyone?/
You as scary as Gary Colemon with a spray gun full of cum from L.I.'s little "bun"/
^^1st line str8 2nd line was ok but the ending was gay 5/10
You could be Niaguria,but I'd be Angel,you could be Obie,but I'd be Eminem/
U the biggest peice of shit to come out of a clit since the song 'AM to PM"/
^^your worst line probably 2/10
Ur like Matin Luther King but ain't got no dream,you like a wrestler without a ring/
U a dick urself,you masterbate by wrapping your hands around urself and rubbing/
^^1st line good 2nd line bad 4/10
U like to act big,but you small in many ways,for u,this must suck so bad/
You bout to die,date's today,and ya got a desease,it called "I fucked dad"/
^^crappy finisher 3/10

overall: 28/60

L.I:

Little hesitant, i understand, i'd be be scared against me too...
Quit battlin, since instrumentals have better lines than you...
^^lmfao hott opener 9/10
Acts like he won the award for best rookie, all he does is boast...
And when it came down to decisions, your wack ass got 0 votes...
^^hott bar good personal 7/10
Beating LoT, than king solo, finally me...this herbs absurd...
Already realized hes wack, thats why he has his name blurred...
^^lol another hott personal 7/10
His whole aspect in this is questionable, why did he even decide to rap...
And whats with his sig, didnt know Em needed help to be put on the map...
^^str8 bar 5/10
Remember this, you need skill to win an award, and you have none...
Tried to convince you were sick, but in the end you were just shunned...
^^good personal but wack closer 5/10

overall: 35/50

vote: L.I

i think both verses started strong but got weaker towards the end...L.I definately won this with the hott personals werent many punches but the flow structure and personals made up for that...k-trin you had a straight verse but i think you should stick to front lines for a little while and elveate some more before you come back to EFL and challenge a vet...<<just my opinion no beef

~!1!~

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

v/ LI.

Opener was enuff to win.. great start an great punch.. stayed consistant.. structure an rhyme scheme worked fine.. personals were cool.. stayed on point.. closed well too.. several quotables in between.. good job.. Trin.. horrible.. every line was played or gay or both.. all the `dick/masturbation` shit was wack.. the `clown` an `your mom` lines were also particularly bad.. stretched lines killed the flow.

Vote:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121685

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HAHAHAHAHA! sorry.


V/L.I.

Yo L.I., holla back...

well i cant vote on this.....but oh well....k-trin......ur verse was garbage......all u talked about was dick...n his mom n shit that noobs say when they know nothin about battlin......LI....wasnt the greatest verse....but enough to win.....i've noticed this about ur rhymes.......that u have trouble rhymin words.....me too/then you......doesnt rhyme.....herbs absurd/name blurred nope doesnt rhyme...if u said name IS blurred that would go better......have none/just shunned.....nope definitely doesnt rhyme.....u use no multies...n since the entire line is just like a sentence...n u try rhymin the last word/words only...u gotta make sure they rhyme exactly.......u really should use some multies....ur rhyme schemes are extremly weak too......thats my impute....but u still win in this battle

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uppin............

k

Yo , Bitch You call yourself L.I. , but skill is something you'd never run by./
You been jerking off some much,your palm look like it been dipped in hand dye/
^^good opener
I bust your lip so bad that it turns red and you get mistaken for Krusty the clown/
Your mom the talk-of-the-town,cause she got on L.I. and jump up-and-down/
^^decent punch
Why you got nothing in your profile except for that you strike fear in everyone?/
You as scary as Gary Colemon with a spray gun full of cum from L.I.'s little "bun"/
^^eh...aiight
You could be Niaguria,but I'd be Angel,you could be Obie,but I'd be Eminem/
U the biggest peice of shit to come out of a clit since the song 'AM to PM"/
^^where's the rhyme?
Ur like Matin Luther King but ain't got no dream,you like a wrestler without a ring/
U a dick urself,you masterbate by wrapping your hands around urself and rubbing/
^^eh..jus aiight
U like to act big,but you small in many ways,for u,this must suck so bad/
You bout to die,date's today,and ya got a desease,it called "I fucked dad"/
^^blah...not strong

overall: 30/50

L.I:

Little hesitant, i understand, i'd be be scared against me too...
Quit battlin, since instrumentals have better lines than you...
^^hmm...decent...only decent cuz there's no wordplay
Acts like he won the award for best rookie, all he does is boast...
And when it came down to decisions, your wack ass got 0 votes...
^^aiight..good
Beating LoT, than king solo, finally me...this herbs absurd...
Already realized hes wack, thats why he has his name blurred...
^^funny
His whole aspect in this is questionable, why did he even decide to rap...
And whats with his sig, didnt know Em needed help to be put on the map...
^^pretty coo
Remember this, you need skill to win an award, and you have none...
Tried to convince you were sick, but in the end you were just shunned...
^^decent closer

overall: 38/50

vote: L.I




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