I just jump on da track and just start some riots
God gave me the skill to thrill, and I'ma apply it
Y'all look at me and think that I'm just an average man
the only difference is, I got a pen and pad in my hand
I make sure I'm not rappin all about what I have and own
I just remember and freestly bout what it took to get to this throne
Any muthafucka that tries to scare me, I make sure they shook
Da coke, diamonds, and money isn't what I took
I took the suckaz pride and all of his confidence
Then I ran up da street, shot it up, and hopped a fence
My everyday life consists of rap, hip-hop, and some more rap
All them dayz of keepin to myself, is just the past
I'm drivin by your house and knockin over your mailbox
My system's so loud, da cops pull me over and search da whip for rocks
I'm so ill, I might give your computer a virus
My subs are shakin your hands so much, you think u got arthritis
I got lotz of shit to say and I'm not afraid to holla
Da last bitch I fucked was a college ho, I had to pop her
I'm gonna end this shit wit another line after this
All da hataz jealous of my voice are gonna get dismissed

what u suckaz think?

ite nice freestyle, got some stuff there u can apply to a battle, wit that got u shook like u got arthritis, good metaphor thats what u do ta put punches on cats here. u do that then u say sumin like U COULDN'T spit crack IF U was feedin from feens, u know say some shit like that, your lines COULDN"T kick shit IF U was writin in a pile of manuore, shit like that with the "U COULDN'T""IF" pretty simple way to have a punch on someone. then personals u take from there name or sig, like for example with your name, u suck on the stage cant move crowds jus better "FYI" it
....... only when u suck so much they rush the stage and kill MC RIOT
i think theres some wordplay in there too
wordplay is kinda like personification, or give a name for somin that aint really what it is, like when people say u spit, when u rap your verse.
or like "imma put this bitch in a "vice" there'll be lots of "gore""
i woudn't give your rhymes 3 dollars if they was a 5 dollar whore

shit like that, and if my shit didn't make sence theres that tutorials somewhere on the home page that tells ya the shit i jus siad.

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thanks dawg i took that advice too, know what the fuck u are talkin bout, keep it real