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this man's got 325 bucks withdrawn...
...but still gets robbed like detroit got pist-on
he tried to get me to battle someone else,i can see this punks frustration...
...so used to explainin his punches,his title even spell's out his puncuation
laugh my ass off, this kid still counts all of his ko's...
...check my name,if i did that id have the matrix avy below
why the fuck did i even waste three credits on him...
...his chances like the first three letters in his sig,they dim
i cant believe his record's twenty two and three...
...cuz guess what? i just slaughtered this wannabe emcee

**walks in..sizes up COMP...slaps bish in the face**

First off,

This herb tryna get heard droppin' a verse that's pure wack shit..-
Don't worry kid..you'll still get 'publicity' after you get ur ass kicked..-
I check ya battles dawg..all you cook up is cash-n-hand lines..-
But your wordplay don't paint the whole picture..sorta like 'head lines'..-
When I dig deeper I find something quite disturbing..you're like 'Irving'..-
Stuck on my 'magic Johnson'..kid, u run a day-care center tryna hurt me..-
Fuck dis fake ass wangsta wannabe..I can't 'picture u big' like IMAX..-
That's because your 'immature punches' 'come premature' to the climax..-


Fuck outta huuuuuuuuuuur..-

How da hell you battlin' me with a fucked up style..celebrity overnight?..-
Nah, U was scared before the fight..dead after u flowed against SIGHT..-


Fuck outta huuuuuuuuuuuur!

aight nice battle by both but i think .::N-Sight::. had the upper hand with better punches and more word play and better structure. no hate to publicity tho, good drop bro but work on those punches dawg.

good battle

VOTE = .::N-Sight::.

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alright check this

Publicity..your shit was good but i didnt see any meta's you had 1 or 2 but that was about it...i didnt get the detroit line..cause they winnin the eastern conference..but your shit was aiight at the end it sort of fell off though..but your shit was good you punches was aiight...and your personals were ok too best line:

he tried to get me to battle someone else,i can see this punks frustration...
...so used to explainin his punches,his title even spell's out his puncuation

n-sight: your shit was good sick flow and structure..and good wordplay..your punches was aiight and your metas was aiight too....good job fam i was feelin this shit...not the best from you but it was pretty good

vote:N

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KiLlAh BwOy

nice drop......uppin for votes....................

last night the pacers merked detroit......just to explain that

oh word 2-2 series im going for DDETROIT............but you got talent fam

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KiLlAh BwOy

this man's got 325 bucks withdrawn...
...but still gets robbed like detroit got pist-on
5...just weak man, nice second line but the 1st, wack shit!!
he tried to get me to battle someone else,i can see this punks frustration...
...so used to explainin his punches,his title even spell's out his puncuation
6...pretty played, but ok!!
laugh my ass off, this kid still counts all of his ko's...
...check my name,if i did that id have the matrix avy below
6...weak again, nice diss of his signature!!
why the fuck did i even waste three credits on him...
...his chances like the first three letters in his sig,they dim
6...u weak, but u consistent!!
i cant believe his record's twenty two and three...
...cuz guess what? i just slaughtered this wannabe emcee
6...weak again, need to elevate playa!!

This herb tryna get heard droppin' a verse that's pure wack shit..-
Don't worry kid..you'll still get 'publicity' after you get ur ass kicked..-
7...gud opener, nice play off of his name!!
I check ya battles dawg..all you cook up is cash-n-hand lines..-
But your wordplay don't paint the whole picture..sorta like 'head lines'..-
7...nice again, and the 2nd line was again a sort of play off of his name!!
When I dig deeper I find something quite disturbing..you're like 'Irving'..-
Stuck on my 'magic Johnson'..kid, u run a day-care center tryna hurt me..-
6...dawg, u fell off, that was pretty weak!!
Fuck dis fake ass wangsta wannabe..I can't 'picture u big' like IMAX..-
That's because your 'immature punches' 'come premature' to the climax..-
6...that IMAX line has been used before!!
How da hell you battlin' me with a fucked up style..celebrity overnight?..-
Nah, U was scared before the fight..dead after u flowed against SIGHT..-
6...pretty weak again, overall gud performance, u came consistent but u fell of slightly to the end!!


POINTS TOTALS

Publicity - 29/50
N-Sight - 32/50

V/ - N-Sight

Publicity u need some serious elevatin, work on ure punches and personals cuz that is wat wins battles, and try more complex wordplay!!
N-Sight, got a feelin this gone be another win for u, one point to make, drop the ..- at the end of every line cuz it gives off the impression that u still a newb. and also u came pretty weak in this battle compared to what u can do playa!!!

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man...the ..- i smy own style

i've seen //...and -....and /...or nothing at all

jus personal taste

uppin for more votes


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my vote goes to N-Sight....u shoudlnt have to explain your rhymes as much as Publicity did. I gotta give mad ups for da PAC props tho...

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punches ns: check ya battles dawg..all you cook up is cash-n-hand lines..-
But your wordplay don't paint the whole picture..sorta like 'head lines'

personals ns:When I dig deeper I find something quite disturbing..you're like 'Irving'..-
Stuck on my 'magic Johnson'..kid, u run a day-care center tryna hurt me..-

metas ns:When I dig deeper I find something quite disturbing..you're like 'Irving'..-
Stuck on my 'magic Johnson'..kid, u run a day-care center tryna hurt me..-

flow ns: his went better and was pretty much even

structure both: both took this because they wasnt that much stretched

overall n sight

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Huh china.