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BLACK THIEF 5 83.33%
gotaasswhoopin4U 1 16.67%
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Old 05-28-04, 09:44 PM   #1
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From: Jerz.....
Gotta Vs Black Thief...rematch...(can Yall Actually Vote On This, Will Return Favors

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10-20 Lines
No D/r
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U Spit First...fuckin Fog..aint No Such Thing As Halfway Crooks
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Old 05-28-04, 10:16 PM   #2
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From: GA all day nigga
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laughin at this fool who dont know he raps whack
Even if had case of flamin gonorrhea he couldn't "clap back"(gonorrhea-tha clap)
lol...thinkin he gonna beat me?he must of died and gone to heaven
gotanasswhoopin for me yet his record is 3-7
a sorry mc who is just made soft
somebody relieve this whack cat he needs to be laid off
Its official..you my bitch...keep ya responses silence
before they have me locked up for domestic violence
Aint even no reason for us to beefin
Cause you only 13...you can only talk shit on tha weekends!
Its like I mail my hits....hes "enveloped" in punchlines
I devour his flow instantly like I was standin in lunch-line
I guess I gotta be a seargent to bring this to his attention:
only when I beef wit niggas is ya name mentioned(get it?)
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Old 05-28-04, 10:25 PM   #3
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iight checkin in.............................................
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Old 05-28-04, 10:51 PM   #4
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them punches u spit..ill shove em back in ya mouth/
talkin bout records like 11-14 isnt somethin to be happy about/
now u a full grown herb, u used to be a little ass sprout/
i shoulda made this a bannin match cuz ur services is something we can do without/
now whos the clown, come to jersey or ill meet u at ya crib/
ladies and gentlemen, his fag is responsible for my sig/
black thief has no way of jackin me/
this freeway lookin ass nigga scared cuz he met up wit rbs cassidy/
u's the fake ass nigga in the hood that claim he got riches/
at his job he gettin hung up on, talkin out im pimpin these bitches/(hes a billcollector)
the kid was off for a second now im back healthy and restored/
popup in newb threads and act like he the best on the board/
ill let hollow tips carv ya chest/
i would feed off ya wack verse but i would starve to death/
i got knoves thatll cut u up and bars to eat u/
i coulda pulled A CREATIVITIE, AND PUT UP A SNICKER BAR TO BEAT BEAT U/
PPL HES NOT U REAL DONT LET THE NAME DECIEVE U/
IM ASKIN THE WHOLE RB..THEY GET TIRED OF THESE WACK PPL/
THIS LIL NIGGA ROLL AROUND WIT HIS LIL JON(LIL DICK, NOHOMO) LIKE HIS NAME WAS SCRAPPY/
AND IF U GUYS HEAR HIM SAY HE CAN BEAT U, JUS TAKE A LOOK AT THE GU IN HIS AVI/
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Old 05-28-04, 10:54 PM   #5
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Originally Posted by gotaasswhoopin4U
them punches u spit..ill shove em back in ya mouth/
talkin bout records like 11-14 isnt somethin to be happy about/
now u a full grown herb, u used to be a little ass sprout/
i shoulda made this a bannin match cuz ur services is something we can do without/
now whos the clown, come to jersey or ill meet u at ya crib/
ladies and gentlemen, his fag is responsible for my sig/
black thief(PAUSE) has no way of jackin me/
this freeway lookin ass nigga scared cuz he met up wit rbs cassidy/
u's the fake ass nigga in the hood that claim he got riches/
at his job he gettin hung up on, talkin out im pimpin these bitches/(hes a billcollector)
the kid was off for a second now im back healthy and restored/
popup in newb threads and act like he the best on the board/
ill let hollow tips carv ya chest/
i would feed off ya wack verse but i would starve to death/
i got knIves thatll cut u up and bars to eat u/
i coulda pulled A CREATIVITIE, AND PUT UP A SNICKER BAR TO BEAT BEAT U/
PPL HES NOT U REAL DONT LET THE NAME DECIEVE U/
IM ASKIN THE WHOLE RB..DO YALL GET TIRED OF THESE WACK PPL/
THIS LIL NIGGA ROLL AROUND WIT HIS LIL JON(LIL DICK, NOHOMO) LIKE HIS NAME WAS SCRAPPY/
AND IF U GUYS HEAR HIM SAY HE CAN BEAT U, JUS TAKE A LOOK AT THE GUY IN HIS AVI/

CORRECTIONS.....
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Old 05-29-04, 12:27 AM   #6
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Gottaasswhoppin- Okay Decent verse i liked it...thought it had some fire...and your punches were okay...they hit harder then black's...Your Structure was decent but could be fixed up a little...Your Personals had some they were decent...But overall you get my vote for better punches..and i felt your verse more...

Black Thief- Verse also was decent...but i wasnt feelin it that much...Your punches were good dont get me wrong...but i felt they didnt hit harder then his...Your Structure i thought was but then his...But overall decent battle...

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Old 05-29-04, 12:39 AM   #7
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From: GA all day nigga
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LOl....ok uppin this bitch
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Old 05-29-04, 01:15 AM   #8
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Ok decent battle.....Breakdown
Black.....ok verse, you had a few punches that hit, an a few perosnals, vocab was ok, flow was tight, structure was good, overall decent verse
Punches: 6/10
Personals: 4/10
Flow: 7/10
Structure: 7/10
Metas: 5/10
Overall:29/50

Breakdown for Gotta:

YOu had a decent verse as well, you had a couple punches, you were lagging a little in the personals area, you had good vocab, but flow was bad, an structure was messed do to strectched lines
Punches: 5/10
Personals: 3/10
Flow: 3/10
Structure: 3/10
Metas: 6/10
Overall: 20/50
Vote: Black.....he jus came a little more polished in this one
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Old 05-29-04, 01:30 AM   #9
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Iight...............................upppin For Yall Idiotic Ass Nukkas
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Old 05-29-04, 10:03 AM   #10
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Uppin...vote on this and leave links to yall battles....Uno
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Old 05-29-04, 04:41 PM   #11
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Old 05-29-04, 05:55 PM   #12
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for Black:

Punches: 5/10
Personals: 6/10
Flow: 8/10
Structure: 6/10
Metas: 7/10
Overall:32/50

for Gotta:

Punches: 5/10
Personals: 5/10
Flow: 5/10
Structure: 4/10
Metas: 7/10
Overall: 26/50

Vote: BlackThief

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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Old 05-30-04, 12:39 AM   #13
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Old 05-30-04, 01:24 AM   #14
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gotta wat happened to u, u'v fallen off

Flow-Gotta ok flow in some parts but wack in others nothing really oustanding. Black u came the whole time except in like 2 lines. Also i loved diz line. Its official..you my bitch...keep ya responses silence before they have me locked up for domestic violence

Punches-about even but black came a little bit harder

Orignality and Complexity-Gotta, u gotta pick up ur game cuz ur lines are palyed b4, n raise ur level. Black ur good

Overall-Black jus came harder on diz one, gotta step ur game up, ELEVATE!

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Old 05-30-04, 09:20 AM   #15
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Aiigth its like this.
Black ya had good punches and ya personnals were good. Ya flow was on lock and structure was great. I thought you were gonna win. Great closer

Gottaasswhoopin ya turned his Record punch against him. Y ahad good punches but ya flow and structure were totally fucked. Y acloser was weak.

Black theif, the closer did it for ya

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