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ok yo its tyme to make my first move im here to serve dudes
wit bad flow kidda lik sinnz things hes a vet with only 2 wins
nigga pleze u must b fakein u know ur momz rites ur lines
cop flow from the internet to fight my rhymez
hahaha shit itz kinda funny cus he dont relize wat i could do to him i hold
wight in the streets wit my dirty demons cock ready to fill sinnz girlz mouth with dirty semon dude u must b dreaming to step to me cus ones i get in ur head i'm like freddy an i will kill u in ur sleep so u must relize dat all i care about is money sex and drugs cock back the glock an leave u in the mud im dat type of thug

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easy win wit this 5 minute key up........


Your here to serve dudes...only dudes you serve is on your knees...*
Wunc your dun they get up and leave and you still beggin please...*
This guy must not know how to read thinkin im a vet wit 2 wins...*
Read right 3 wins and you got it right this vet is names Blak Siinz...*
I aint need to cop shit to fight your Rhymes you runnin outa time...*
Your admition to this site was over assoon as you started to rhyme...*
At this time im about to make "Jonny Face" his own worst enemies...*
You about to be beat with your own lines and make you lose energy...*

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Nice flow both of ya...break down

Blak-
Struc-7/10
word-6/10
punches-6/10
person-6/10
humor-5/10

jon
Struc-5/10
word-6/10
person-5/10
humor-6/10
punch-6/10

Jon-28/50
BLak30-50

Vote black both elevate

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spit: blak
punch: blak
multi: i dunno
flow: blak

basicly blak had better punchs, spit, flow..everythin...n to da other guy..damn dawg..learn how to rhyme better..ur shyt was elementary..u also gotta learn how to set ur shyt up betta..ight

Black sinz had better flow, and his rhyming was good. but hey I am still elevating so hey it takes time but my vote goes to black sinz for better rhymes.

ok oy i will git it up to blak yo cus my flow was kinnda weak yo nice battle dogg an if u wanna battle set it up an go first yo im game

jonny had pretty nice flow........his punches didnt hit quite as hard as blak's did....some lines were kinda played......structure was mad fucked up......wasnt very organized/looked like it was all just slopped together

blak had nice flow and and easy to read structure......personals were better.......just looked a lot more experienced......the way he set everything up made him deliver a lot harder

vote-Blak Siinz

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Black
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 8/10
Humor 7/10

Jonny
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 6/10

v/ Black Siinz

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