10 lines ONLY


no crew/hate/dr votes

check in...once u check in...time starts...we both have 20 min



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no no no . as many lines as you can jot. as long as its with in the time limit.
time limit will start when you agree !!!!!!!!!!!

then forget it...whats the point of 10000000 LINES... okay.. 16 LINE MAX


if u don't agree...then fuck it

woh steady . ok then lets do this......3,2 1, start typeing.

UGH...first off,

Look at this idiot I'm givin a mirror..let you meet yourself-
To see this battle like ur Friday nights..watch you beat urself-
'Snake', u got urself coiled around my dick..plz let me breathe-
A walk in the park is like this battle..I'm takin' it with ease-
You have no future in rap 'battle'..cuz ur 'venom' is all spit-
I aint' neva seen someone so excited to get dey ass kicked-
U got 'Lil Kim in ur SIG..what, u think u da baddest bitch-
I will rip this by textual..you're bisexual, glad to switch-
U wack fuck..back up before a mack truck cracks u up-
Sum lines long and short..like u snortin' smack and got stuck-
Ur structure is a touch wack..where's ur wordplay and metas?-
I'm forever betta..this herb betta neva bother to step-up-
Cuz my fist to face leave ur teeth braced..capped and spaced-
When u spit, I hear nothing like you rapped in space-


Fuck outta huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuur

aight ere it goes.

how the fuck you notched up a half-half century of wins. when you aint even left ya elementary school for dims./.

thick fuck only wins coz he battles with newbs . your grappling with one right now but its a fight youll lose./.

this big headed fuck raps for the fame but i want none of this. if a label let me id release me album annoiminus./.

man, didnt you realise me and slim are identicle twins. i jus appitimize the fact a went bald b4 him./.

where both fat, but your jus a big fat fuck. im phat with a PH, you need a tummy tuck.,.

i"ll ruck with any fucking smuck in your crew, rip em all to bitz. like your mother does to the condoms when im dick balling her tits./.

(this line goes out a tune a lil at the start but sort its self out by the end )

im crawling with talent thats why im always so galent. dont care bout what you wrote. the only way to beat me is to break the rules and get ya boys to do a crew vote./.

that mother line was nasty, im sorry but had-to-be-done. dont get mad, but am your new, dad-to-be-son./.

face to face, you rip me you fucking waste of space. youll need a brace to hold your fucking face in place./.

coz attack and i react with a barrage of punches. few whacks to the head couple o long lunges./.

im harder then a dick fulled by five viagra. cool as fuck one look makes your bitch flow like NIAGRA./. .... (falls)

your no thug jus a faggot lil fairy. if you got nicked i predict youd sing like a canaire./.

y"all realise im unstoppable. like your bitch getting turned on when i strip show her ma abdominals./.

vote battlesnake, fuck n sight. his shits out of his note book penned last night./.



look i broke the time limit coz a freind poped in for half of an hour and couldnt really be anti-soicial. peeps, dont think im shitting you. it was my idea of the time limit in the first place so belive me when i say it was dropped in 20 mins. fact.. to be hounest it was done in less....


uppin 1

LMAO @ dat pre-written bull shit...I'm not gonna DQ u cuz I want the pleasure of rippin ur ass to pieces


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yo sorry bout all the lines i meant to say bars anyway dont matter huh..
or you gonna hold it against me.........

what the fuck you on about pre writting shit.......ha ha ha... when i said me and slim are identicle twins i werent lying. well sort of...

aight then i prove it..... give me a task bout any topic. THINK SOMETHING RIDICLIOUS. AND I"LL YOU HOW GOOD I REALLY AM.....IDIOT

^ LOL...HERB

Lets vote on this so I can do away with this dumb bitch...ur gonna lose this battle ne way...

i shud DQ ur wack ass..LOL..but Imma enjoy people clownin on ur for tryna say that fuckin MANUSCRIPT is a 20 min. KEY that u took 40 min. to post

mhahahaaaaaaaa

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N-sight, you had some good multi's, and most of yo punches connected.
Battlesnake, you were good also, but you didn't have enough wordplay to win this battle.

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battlesnake your punches werent hott they was str8...wtf is up with your structure too...put that shyt into lines not paragraphs...it dont look right how you doin it and it causes less of an impact on your verse...u had no personals which is why n-sight thought it was pre-written and the fact that it did take 40 mins to drop a 20 min key.
your verse lacked in every area

overall: 2/10

n sight u didnt come to hott either...you had a couple decent punches and hott ass wordplay and multies but i dont think you showed your full potential and i think against black u didnt need to bring your A game... good structure consistent flow decent meta's couple nice punches good verse

overall : 6/10

vote: n-sight

~!1!~

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I have to give this one to n-sight. his lyrics where way better, he rhymed more and he had more personels in his lyrics and he had more comedy in it also so my vote goes to n-sight.
thnx and hey someone hit up on this battle iight thnx.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127480