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06-19-04, 12:19 PM
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rhyming help
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I'm a little confuzed with rhyming because when you have a big word and try to rhyme, you end up only rhyming the last part of the word which isn't a perfect rhyme. So please can anyone out there explain how to rhyme perfect and how you look at a word to make the flow sound really good cause i've been messing up on this and I really want to elevate so bad. If you can, you could spit the word up and highlight it how the sounds fit in, I would need this explained perfectly to understand because it's a big problem dat i wanna overcome. Peace
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06-19-04, 12:39 PM
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I dunno if u PM'ed others but u PM'ed me, this question has no answer. Its all about experience and ur education in the english languaged, well not even that, if you have a large array of vocubarly it will help because you will have a wider range or words to rhyme against. When ur rhyming trying and lay out ur sentences in syllables, the way they sound.
e.g.Biological, By Oh Lodge E Cool. Then find a word or words thay match with syllables. Thats the only way i I think u can explain how to rhyme. But sayin that I dont care, big words are nice to use, but a strong compoud sentence with a good message its much better IMO. |
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06-19-04, 12:47 PM
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.... let me get your terminology straight first off...
a perfect monosyllabic rhyme is ... cat and hat an imperfect mono syllabic rhyme is white and life...sounds similar enough because of the long 'i' a polysyllabic rhyme is ... tougher and rougher... or food stamps and mood lamps an imperfect polysyllabic rhyme is... chips and beer... and britney spears see? it's easy... just watch the vowels first... like moat and hope... and cope and dote... then notice that consanants make the difference... since those ones^^all ended in hard consanants... it wouldn't sounds as good to use a soft one... like moat and hose... see it's getting iffy at that point... these rules transfer to 'multies' fairly easily Ex.1 Man, I could drop ten verses in a five minute span and I would stop when curses spin the high winning hand then you die when I plan... because it's all premeditated wonder why I'm the man... step up and you'll be dead it's fated I won't even bold... because it's all one big rhyme... not saying it's good... it's actually quite wack... but it's a lesson in rhyming... and I hope you understand...
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06-20-04, 03:39 PM
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thanks for your help, I appreciate it dudes. Can anyone give me an example of a big word that rhymes with the sylables highlighted or done in caps. Like, experimental, identical, mistical, phycological. There just some examples...
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06-20-04, 03:57 PM
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... you'll have trouble finding entirely perfect polysyllabic rhymes for those...
experimental accidental incidental mental ... but this is all moot... you can get this type of help from a online rhyming dictionary... but that will make you WACK My style is unventured and experimental and while you spend your time ask: "where and when will?" he strike! like double dykes on two headed dildos hypnotical chronicle bionic body kill blows illogical sonic will ironic to flow so deftly keyin light in a thread that this kid regards so hefty so weighty he drinks eighties like duplicate forties instigate a lesbo sandwhich with above mentioned shorties identical twins of sin with no two rhymes the same when to go in a spin that puts most kids lines to shame pass blame and wind shitting on kids heads sweet mythical logistical pattern that is slitting unseen bedsheets mystical check a threesome off and grab another list to go crazy on these lines i'm getting lazy on smokin grass like a haze lawn opens mind's planes left and right on insane though theological theories of wax and wane pained minds claim the psycological lyric ballet sliding smooth so like skis in swiss chalets hungry to eat emcees that cruise outta site like fast valets... when I spit and that's it check ya throat for knife slits... it's over... I bolded the multies... and italicized the internals... check out... identical... it really doesn't have any rhymes i can think of... but I used 'when to go'... you get a similar sound... also check out... 'mystical' and 'list to go' or 'chronicle' and 'sonic will' pz
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