aight 10-14 lines
no feeding
no biting
no cheating
u drop ur verse first good luck

alright check check

yo iam gonna need a glock to put this bitch out of his missory//
for which he needs to back up his lyrics before they turn him history//
if ur lyrics do not to a good job putting put u to shame//
then ur white ass is gonna be eatin up by my lyrics flame//
so come on now bitch tell me what u got for ur name is not don but Nancy//
so prepare for the worse because my lyrics are gonna be handy//
while ur lyrics are gonna sound like a bad blow job givin to me//
but all I got to say before this bitch is through is welcome to the cAR WASH of dons slow job 2//
my name stand for ku klux klan hater not klit klit klit hater//

on line 3 i messed up it should be do instead of to.

aight that wasnt that bad im not gona waste good lines and time on this cause i kno u jus need some more practice

kkkhater your not skilled enough to be a guest on this site...
you suck so bad i'll have u beat by the end of this night...
are you part of the klan cause you know you can see ur boner through those sheets they will peek...
you lucky they white so nobody can see how easily u skeet...
he blechaed his hseets white cause the only color martha stewart sold was cream...
wake up bitch i kno its late but this isnt another wet dream...
nobody in real life likes you thats why you call yourself hater...
you couldnt pull this off in real life cause rap battles arent for skaters...
you sound like a boy whos confused what to do...
start off by changin your name cause the klan dont like a jew

aight wasnt great but im not gona waste good lines no offense hater

none takin becuase if u read in the poetic area the struggling nation u no but anyways were uppin.

Flow: Don
punches: don
Personals:don
rhymes: kkk
Humor: Don

Vote goes 2 Don...KKK u elavated alot since ur last battle keep elevating and u can get much better...good drop don still need 2 elevate...b

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

aight thanks for the feedback uppin for votes drop a vote please

damn dis was a hot battle but while readin don verse i got lost fa a second but he had harder punches but flow and ryhmes go 2 kkkhater

v/kkkhater

thanx for the feed back but hey people we are still uppin for votes..

Im gonna have to give this battle to kkkhater i think he won this battle...it was a close battle if i had to do points kkkhater won probably by 1-2 points not much if ya both elevate more i think don would have won if he would have use more personals

Vote-kk

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yo dis battle wuz luke warm i mean both mc's did enuff 2 get by but don had better punches and overall ryhme so i would say my vote go's 2 him

vote=don

aight thanks for the feedbak uppin for some more votes pc

this battle was aight...both mc's did good...don had some punches and his rhymes were better..so my vote go so don...since he did betta

v/ DON

iight im really tired so if my vot is lame then let me knwo i will edit it and leave more feedback

don-your verse was okay i would like to see you work on your structure a lil bit because your lines was stretched and shit......makes your flow choppy......your punches was okay and shit but you could still use some elevation......otther then that the shit was good.......keep it up man

kkkhater-i seriously hope that you come harder then this in our battle in the league......cause if you dont your gunna get merked.....you had good structure but thats about it your punches was played and the concepts was wack.....elevate

v/don

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