aight

5 barz
first to 5
3-0 ko
no bitin feedin or swayin votez
im up first and dont take too long

Win by KO
-strobe

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Ayo

None of ya "Adjectivez" seem to be Fittin ya Description as Far as Flowin Consist/ya sig
"Get Low'' in a Ditch, and the only thing you'll be Facin iz da Bonez from my Fists/
Maybe Sippin on "Hipnotik" got ya ''Stratagiez" Twisted my lyricz are Verbally Gifted/
The only thing you Sick Wit iz Herpez or either my Oral Liquidz/
You only good at "Auctioning Pianoz" cuz a "Organ Donar" iz what ill have you Signed Up/
Cuz sittin in a "Barberz Chair" the only way youll eva get "Lined Up"/
Injectin "Aidz" wit "Exlax" wouldn't let ya Sick Shit Slide Quick when Pilez Stick my Spitz "Lay you Down" like "Tiled Brickz"/
Intellegence ya IQ iz Half of Mine, Ill Gag ya Spine, Trash ya Linez/
Then Throw you Back up and eat you again just to Pass the Time/

aight you up

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aiight seems like u spent time on that verse and it was still basic...

check it


"8th disciples is here now" well i gotta stop your fun//
think you got 8 ill heads?? show me cuz i dont see one//*
fuck rappin, physique its time for you to start beggin for mercy//
Beat me?...thats funny like living in florida but reppin New Jersey//
i'll rip this fags voice box....and leave part of his mind hangin//
then leave em labotomized...tryna audio battle in sign language//
Kids pissed like angry dj’s cause im knockin his records//
shady done left you fucked up so im takin sloppy seconds//
wastin my time...im too fly for this feather-weight crew//
hell....even your keyboard says that Im ahead of U//**

~!1!~

explanations:
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*= in crew collab they said they hot "8 ill members"
**=on a keyboard the letter I is in front of U

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aight uppin on diz
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Whoa...Flow that was a fucking sick closer dawg...holy shit...you one this wit harder punches too. No need to break this battle down...it was one sided. Physique, you had some a'ight punches...just elevate dawg.

Vote- Flow Intelligent

No hate. Flow, you forgot to poll vote in my battle wit Lil-trip.

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aight uppin and good verse Flow...i really liked it

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None of ya "Adjectivez" seem to be Fittin ya Description as Far as Flowin Consist/ya sig
"Get Low'' in a Ditch, and the only thing you'll be Facin iz da Bonez from my Fists/

rhymes nice...but the punches aren't directed at him...filler --ish


Cuz sittin in a "Barberz Chair" the only way youll eva get "Lined Up"/
Injectin "Aidz" wit "Exlax" wouldn't let ya Sick Shit Slide Quick when Pilez Stick my Spitz "Lay you Down" like "Tiled Brickz"/
Intellegence ya IQ iz Half of Mine, Ill Gag ya Spine, Trash ya Linez/
Then Throw you Back up and eat you again just to Pass the Time/

^^^ Again, clever attempts at wordplay...but the punches aren't hitting that hard

"8th disciples is here now" well i gotta stop your fun//
think you got 8 ill heads?? show me cuz i dont see one//*
fuck rappin, physique its time for you to start beggin for mercy//
Beat me?...thats funny like living in florida but reppin New Jersey//

^^ dats funny and tru cuz i was thinkin the same thing...LOL

LMAO @ "8 hot emcees"...hehehe

no need to progress any further

Vote: FLow...much harder hitting punches


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this one goes to flow for his crazy closure and he had more personals in here and he had more rhyming so this vote goes to flow. peace

aight my vote goes to flow cause flow i liked ur punches u didnt waste words u were to the point which made them more effective and dna i think urs was good it jus lacked the flow and setups i duno wat to suggest cept keep practicin
v/flow

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uppin /

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