10 to 15 lines. u spit first, no crew votes no hater votes.

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right, lets go then
have my verse up soon
tired now so yeh

Grimripper, straight rip of Grim Reaper
I'll take my gun out on you, shoot blullets through yo' left peeper,
You'll try to battle but keep diggin' yourself deeper
I'm up the top of the hill, but fyou know for you it's too steep-a,
So yous new to this shit, but then again so am I,
That don't give you an excuse, to spit yo rhymes like a lie,
See your no good with your looks no girlie girls want to love ya,
You gotta stick to them sheep, see they won't push ya or shove ya
This is goin nowher, it aint no usual battle,
I don't need to try here, u got less vocab than a cattle



Let's see what u got then

Yo so whens this battle getttin goin then Ripper, i hant got all day u kno,

Fuckin shttered, lets get goin

yo traxic why am i doin this its a waste of my time
you cant mess with me bitch im in my prime
traxik u spittin is about as exciting as ben stein
i wouldnt buy ur lyrics if they were on clearence for a dime
you say youll bust out a gun on me and shit
try stuff with me and ur ass'll get lit
while ur writing this ur probly eatin ur cornpuffs
cuz the only shit i see here are mother fuckin bluffs
and its grimripper cuz ill rip another hole in ur ass
u spit like michael jackson or that pussy lance bass
dont post on this site no more ur never gonna win son
see what u should no is this battle is already won

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alright alright, about time too, takin fuckin ages, thort this wa sposed 2 be freestyle battlin,

lets get sum votes up in herre then

man u can tell this was a newb battle....
you both need a lot of work... but i think there is a winner

vocab-tie
punches-ripper
structure-ripper
multi's-tie cause they're were none
flow-traxik
winner-ripper

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repping 8th disciples...



record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

the wackest battle i may have ever read

um grimreaper

your style is fucked wit worn out vocab and sorry style any one will merk you man you need to elevated badly work on punches metas and other such stuff man ok

trakix-- wack to man the only reason i am givin youthe vote is the one punche that remotly was good was yours so you need to work on the same stuff he does ok man

You'll try to battle but keep diggin' yourself deeper

week punch but the best

v/trackix

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yo return the favor dudes links in the sig

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weak battle

vocab-tie
punches-ripper
structure-ripper
multi's-none
flow-ripper


Vote Grim Ripper

Return the Favor at my battle Roop vs LuvDemTitis

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Trax- you had a couple good punches..i liked your opening punch..yo flow was aight..yo creativity was ok in this one.
Grim- you need to step it up dawg..yo rhymes and punches were pretty basic..yo flow was pretty good..but you need to work on them hard punches. yo opening line was not good either.
yo im not a fuckin pro or anything, but i think you both need to step it up if you want respect on this site. vote trax
Please vote on my shit..it would be much appreciated
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125287

Yeh that shit was shit, I got sum much betta battles in me, thanks 4 the votes an that, an yous who didnt vote 4 me, open your eyes, and see the potential, I'll take whoever on 2mrw, bit shifaced now, 2 tired sleeeeeep.

Much good
Traxik

grimripper better verse and pucnhes. plain and simple. what a weak battle. return the damn fava. grimripper work on wordplay and structure dawg.Traxik step up yo game my nig.

vote=grim

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

yea this is my first battle, all u voters its appreciated. take a good look tho cuz all traxik says is about me a sheep and stuff its weak. but hey u guys are the voters

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Death is Upon us....