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Old 06-01-04, 09:57 PM   #1
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Defintion of a Gangsta

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Verse 1..

im From a Town Called Brooklyn..
Where i roll wit the iilist Machinery
Got them 22's and Pistols That Will
Leave ya Ass's History
Brains so Cleva ull Be Left an Unsolved Mystery
if Cops say Something ill Say it was Self Defence
and u aint Even Come Close To Hittin Me..
But i Ryde Wit them Gangstas
Bangout wit Them Gangstas
Chill wit the Same Gangstas That Had ya Homie
Tied up to a Anker
The Block is Hot like a Tea Ketal Cuz Of all
The Gangstas Gettin Shit Settled
u No im No Fan of Rock n Roll..
But i stay wit that Heavy Metal
im Dangerous to This Rap Game
a Multi Talented Labron James
Wit Arms Programed to Snatch Watches
and Heavy Chains
44 That Will Tear up a Niggas Frame.
and i Aint talkin bout No Picture.
But it Wont be a Preety picture
After these Halo Tips hit ya ..And
Some Say im a Crimnal Cuz i got my Own Filin Cabinet
Or They Say im Evil Cuz i treat good Things like Bad Habbits
By Takin Advantage Of u and Ya Pride Because
Snitches n Evil Dont Mix so We Bound To Collide
Leavin u Swissed up From head to Toe
And if Ur Homies Wanna Get invloved then u can tell em lets go
But if These Guns decide To Rang Our Randomlly
Everyone On the Block Gettin a Shot
Like a New Born Baby

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Im Full a Fokkiss Man..i Got Glock in My Hand
Throw u off a Roof and Blast a Hole in ya chest Right b4 u land
i Thought i Told ya Man..im a Crazy Motherfucker
ill Put u Threw Pain Havin u Screamin Louder than Chris Tucker..
Plus im From Brooklyn Man..Home Of the Gangstas
u Walkin into a Croud of Heads so u Wont no Who shanked ya
Plus im Sober Man..So Itz Easier For Me to See...
Even if i Waz Drunk i got The Lazer to Make my aim More Accuret
u SEE?

Verse
im Full of Fokissed Mang..Success is On My Mind
Got the Gun The Knife That Will Instantly End ya Life
i Aint Jokin When i Tell Ya..
That if i Come See u that u and ya famliy
GoNna need a Fuckin Stetcher.
My Rhymes Silly wen it Comes to Makin That Milly..
Fuck That My Rhymes are Dumb Silly ya Herd
and i aint Talkin Bout no 4th Grade Curse Words
New To This Game n Makin a Deep Impact
in ya World..
Every Werd i Say is Conshaversal
Worse Than R Kellys Encounter Will Little Girls
Got The Chrome Rubber Grib That Shinin Like Diomand Pearls
Strong Enuff to lift Your upperBody Off the Ground like
U Waz Doin Stomach Curls
My Flow Make a Nigga Wanna Hurl
Cuz My Words Fuck Wit ya Soul
ill Have ya Hands up Like u Tryin 2 Block a Field Goal
Right Now i Feel Like im Old Cuz im Full Of Wisdom n Knowledge
Got Shit in My Brain That Will Have Me Skippin Threw Collage..
soo i Suggest u Dont Fuck wit Me
cuz it Would Be
A WRAP like Bondage...So u Mide as Well Equipp Ya Vest
and a Bullet Proof face Mask noww
Cuz im Hittin Everything on You Includin Ya Fucking eyeBrows
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Old 06-01-04, 10:19 PM   #2
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I was feelin' that... structure kinda odd, but I was able to adapt.

Iunno... it was weird, cuz it was good, but it wasn't... no offense.

Good: The Block is Hot like a Tea Ketal Cuz Of all
The Gangstas Gettin Shit Settled
u No im No Fan of Rock n Roll..
But i stay wit that Heavy Metal
im Dangerous to This Rap Game
a Multi Talented Labron James
Wit Arms Programed to Snatch Watches

Bad: My Rhymes Silly wen it Comes to Makin That Milly..
Fuck That My Rhymes are Dumb Silly ya Herd
and i aint Talkin Bout no 4th Grade Curse Words
New To This Game n Makin a Deep Impact
in ya World..

You got good potential... so keep writin' man... The more you write, the better you get... and save all of your shit, even if it's wack.

Jus' some pointers... I liked your song tho, Hit me up when you got it on audio maybe I can feel it better when it's spit instead of writ.
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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 06-01-04, 10:21 PM   #3
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iites dogz thanz 4 the info..
ill holla no doubt
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Old 06-01-04, 10:24 PM   #4
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aight man, Doin' what I can to help ya out. I know how it is not gettin' a response at all.
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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 06-01-04, 10:36 PM   #5
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i hate than most..
plus i hate wen 1 person rates and
audio n says sutin negative..and ppl make a joke out of it
and 4get wut the topic is about
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Old 06-02-04, 12:05 PM   #6
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it was iight but it wasnt to bad i jus think u need to elevate a lil iight good luck kid........................
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