I already posted this on the other RB, just wanted to get more feedback.

I write dope rhymes that will thrill minds
Slide out lethal nines that will bite lives
Drop shots that'll blow cops off the block
Lock locks that'll stop 'n' hold a cyclops

I've done alot to reach the lethal level that I'm in right now
Even if you had Bush's army, you still can't take Kahn down
Nothin' can harm me, I move faster than the speed of light
I'm a ghost, i'll bring nightmares to ur peaceful sleep at night
You prolly could've merked me before, but now i've elevated
Shit i don't have to conquer ur loss bitch, i'll fuckin create it
Put you down on ur knees, watch u bleed, hear ur last words
Then go for my next goal, to rule and conquer planet Earth
I'll rap circles around you, till u start wonderin what happened
I'm a mystery, and this mystery evolves, as I continue rappin'

I write dope rhymes that will thrill minds
Slide out lethal nines that will bite lives
Drop shots that'll blow cops off the block
Lock locks that'll stop 'n' hold a cyclops

Peace

its alright i wasnt feelin it all that much but sure it wasnt to bad att all........................

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^^Yeah I didn't take alot of time writin' it...

'bout 10 min.

Only thing I liked about it was the chorus.