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killin' Spitz |
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5 | 83.33% |
V.I.P.. |
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1 | 16.67% |
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VIP vs killin' Spitz,
IP: 2E43 6BFE
aight man 10 lines aka 5 barz no dr votes spit 35 mins after check in aight ima go get a drink then spit aight
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IP: 2E43 6BFE
aight man checkin in i just gotta get a drink then i'll get rite to spiten gl
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IP: 4289 77F4
This is my check in
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IP: 2E43 6BFE
u shouldnt have got me ~started are u crazy/
i blame your momma for haven a ~retarted baby/ your fuckin rhymes are wat u fuckin ~lack shady/ (he calls himself shady) i pitty your momma for haven a ~crack baby/ i wish u would just kill yourself an get it over/ i'm battlen a fuckin retard who looks like a ogar/ (ogar is a ugly creture) suddenly a fuckin board just cracks over your head/ just be a suicide from tha drug facts i placed in your bed/ take tha bat and break your upper hip/ somethin smells must be your upper lip/
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IP: 4289 77F4
V.I.P
You can dish it out but can you take it// you think you can rap but you cant even fake it// Scientist study to see if your a him or a her// your lyrics are hot...like DQs freezer//(dairy Queen) You say your ghetto but its all just an act// u couldn't out rap an old lad, you gotta face all the facts// Your name is retarded and your lyrics are WACK// all of your tough talk is nothing but a hack// why do you even try spittin without rhymes like these// i can't understand you like your spittin in Japenese// So just go out and bite some more rhymes// by accepting this battle your just wasting your time// so go out to bye a new CD and bite of off it// you think you can beat me, cause your a fuckin' idiot// |
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IP: 2E43 6BFE
yo man u spit 11 instead of ten but thats aight uppin for votes
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D
uppin fo votes
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D
we uppin for votes don't sleep on use
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 9C97 48BE
aight not the greatest but has potential..
suddenly a fuckin board just cracks over your head/ just be a suicide from tha drug facts i placed in your bed/ first of all this line dosent make any sence at all,or the one under it vip ya gotta pratice ya personals n flow,or else ya'll never win,ya gotta get his name in there for some wordplay(tutorial) spitz ya flow was good n ya had some punches that destroyed what he had ya on the right track just try n get more complex wit ya ryme scheems n stretch the shit out a bit more(tutorial) ican't stress how much ya can learn if ya just keep readin them. breakdown punches/spits flow/spits multis/none creativity/spits vocab/spits overall/spits honest vote/spits |
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IP: 68EF D651
my vote goes 2 spitz, sorry vip i was jst feelin his more ya know. spitz- lyrics were tight, flow was pretty smooth, yer like i sed, i was feelin it. all in all, id say 6-7/10
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 48EA 7C3F
vip, your verse was prett basic, not many punches and rookie flow. elevate yo, you got the ideas down n shit... keep practicing
killin, took it, better flow, better punches, better pretty much everything. you have a sense of rhythm, but needs more multies n all that shit... sorry for no breakdown but i gotta get goin return the favour, im in a battle me vs sorel...
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nice battle
IP: C06D 063F
ya ya
Krusty has been retarded out from the amount the word got used in the battle. VIP - nice flow kinda basic, but I luv basic, now Krusty iz basic but original. work on sum harder punches ta go w/ tha flo i didn't really understand this line Quote:
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very weak closer ![]() ya started off hard then trailed Spits - again sum basic rhymes just kind of takin ya where THEY go, not you takin the basic rhymes where YOU want them to go. That is called set-up. I rhyme basic because I tell stories and take them rhymes right where I want them to go throughout. I liked this line Quote:
Ya both did good my vote goes to Spits cuz he came a bit harder. keep doin whut yur doin cuz its fun Peace out ta both of you I got 4 battles dat needs closed links below drop honest luv and I'll hit up every single battle you 2 got open Peace fiends |
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~ Retired ~
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IP: A0FF C2C1
THIS BATTLE WAS WHACKKKKK!!! both need elavating and V.I.P u lost it dude ur rhymez where whack Punchs where WEak Try USeing Personals and shit next battle Good Try tho now Killin'Spitz.... on the Other side had a More Elavated Verse BUT YET Still VERRY Weak u need more Punches A Couple of Played out ass Lines and u need to elavate both u need a more Elavated Verse that GOs for Both
But i gotta Vote and its goin for V/Killin, Spitz
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Suspended: Biting
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IP: 5E78 2461
yo ima give this one to v.i.p i thought in my eyes that he came harder than the other doo he had some good punches and flow he just stomped the other doo
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~Cursed With Illness~
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IP: D473 F2A6
This one goes to Killin Spitz for better structure and rhymes. Good job to both.
Vote - Killn Spitz |
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