10-15 lines

no d/r
no crew
no hate

5 votes to win
you spit first

yo
check this nigga........


What I spit is the truth//
Dawg, fuck a cavity cuz ill put a hole in ya tooth//
Dont be around me nigga when i conceal those things//
Cuz im clumbsy, I might spill yo brains//
Nigga, in the streets what I do is more then rap//
I throw bullets from the shotgun like quaterbacks//
So dawg you betta duck when the tools spray//
Cuz if not, just stay in "The house" like LL Cool J//( the t.v show that used to come on)
Dawg comin at me what is you psyhcopathic??//
Cuz im loadin up the semi-atuomatic, while you tryna get a squad established//
Nigga you gonna need more then an umbrella to help against my rain//
And when I pop you, you gonna need more then Tylenol to against the pain//
And you can't survive in the streetz cuz you not gutta//
Cuz when the heat is involved you get soft like butta//
My gun gonna test you and Im the proctor//
You'll prolly die before gettin to the hospital hire a tag-a-long doctor//
Im threw wastin my time on u cuz niggas already callin winnas//
I can just simply shoot ya lights out then really put you on sports center//
Nigga

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checkin in

Yo it dont take that long yo

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aiight check it...

dis muthafucka is nuthin but a amatuer/
2 fuckin lines is all it takes ta damage-ya/
dis faggot aint runnin-tha-streets/
puttin a hot-pack in his pants is his definition of tuckin-tha-heat/
dis guy's right-tho, i am a fuckin phsyco/
never knowin when i might blow, murderin bitches wit my tight-flow/
i'ma wire ur mouth shut like kanye west/
i kick return flows like dante-i'm-tha-best!/
you couldnt "step" to me if u was on tha "stairmasta"/
ur fuckin tremblin tha second i glare-at-cha/
ur a fuckin pussy in ur crotch and ur brain/
if i catch u on tha street ill jack u for ur watch-and-ur-chain/
this is lyrical combat, all u got-is-a-pistol/
im blastin for days and firin bombs-n-missiles/
muthafucka i'll run up on ya and pull tha tech out my pocket/
load it and cock it/
aim it at ure eye socket n let off a fuckin rocket

uppin

yo lets get some votes i'll return the favor just leave the links

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i think renegade1 murdered him!!!!!
street legend sounds like he got a ghost write on his first few rhymes cuz he fell apart after that!! fuckin faggot

yo this was a hot battle..i was impressed with both ya'll creativity, but however someones got to win, and i thought that Renegade had hotter punches and a hotter closer.
vote- renegade

street legend got killed

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uppin

ok lets see I believe RENE gets this one becuase. he flowed better, he had more rhymes, and he had more personals in his lyrics and his closure put this to shame..

Both did good...structure wasn't good tho...the punches were good...but Rene took this one cuz his punches were harder...

vote = Rene