I'm New To The Site And I Be On Da Other One Too........... I'm A Female Emcee From MurdaLand (NOT B-MORE!!!!)

Here Go Sumthin From A Flow Dat's Not Finished Yet...........

Name's L A T A Female Emcee Dreamin Of Stackin G's
Till They High As The Sky On A Sunny Day In Da Chi
Wit Ice On My Wrist Sittin In Da Six Sippin On Cris
Smokin Dat Hish High As Shit Gurls Ridin Wit Me
Security Six Deep Dead Presidents In A Big Heap
Fame And Fortune I'd Love To Keep Wood Grain On Da Dash
Dro In Da Stash 100 G's In Cash Bein Broke Is Part Of T's Past
Gotta Keep Writin Dis Shit Gotta Last Can't Go Back
To Dreamin Like A Crack Addict Feignin Dat Shit Aint
Where It's At I Want Pockets Always Fat Lockets All In Plat
All Types Of Shoes In On Da Rack Platinum Plaques On
Da Wall Diamond Studded Gucci Thongs It's Either Rap Or
Nothing At All School Ain't Goin So Well Tryin And Tryin
Only To Fail I'm Goin Through Hell Tryna Make My Parents
Proud The Silence of Dissapointment Is Just So Loud
Secret Whisperings As I Leave The Room Slowly Sealing My
Diamond Encrusted Tomb...................

Not Finished Yet

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L-A-T

Take A Bath Wit Da Catholics In Holy Water No Wonder Dey Tryna Hold Me Under Longer
-Eminem "Renegade"

Dat Gurl Wit Da Vicious Flows And Tight Thighs
Niggas Wanna Sign Her And Make Her Dey Wife
-Love And Tears LAT

fat pockets, wood grain, stackin g's, sippin cris, platinum plaques?....


the last part of your verse was a little more personal...the first part was commercial crap....seems like it might flow well, but you're lacking some content...alot....

work on wordplay and feed off of your pain...hip hops alot more than stackin g's....

My name's kleetus kleaver...this is my first post...keep it up....be easy..

nice, keep elevatin, welcome

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