yo, this is a lil poem i wrote, it's long though n i didn't edit it. read it then, then gimmie some feedback peace...


its this thing called darkness it ruins all of our lives,
and if youre anything like me you love it when youre high,
now it might just be a thought that never reverberates,
wishing that you knew me and you didnt have to hate,
its all about the way things work out every time,
when depression is the key and it unlocks your mind,
if it wasnt for the pain that i constantly feel,
i wouldnt be spittin rhymes and tellin you the deal,
as we create another level a demension if you wanna,
to live go forth in prosper where they legalize marijunia,
see its my brain that feels the pain outside im unaffected,
created from the hate that is mistaken and recollected,
its a different kind of ryhme showing you all the deal,
the pain that lies within my heart im showing you how i feel,
its all just words on paper all words that no one can relate,
i hate it like a razor blade thats to dull to cut my face,
and as i tear open the wound and expose everything to yall,
i be showing you things that you never thought about,
never thought that i was feelin never thought that i was real,
its all about my life now tell me will my wounds will they heal,
or will they dry up and crack up break back openagain?
was it worth it when you taunted me show me whose the real man?
see the pressure in my mind see it gets me everytime,
puts me up against the wall force out lyrics so i rhyme,
do you think i wanna do this, hell nah i hate the music,
i wanna throw it all away "why?" cos i dont wanna do it,
but now im feelin pressures everysingle time i stop,
lyrics that keep on flowin an if i dont write em i might pop,
i wont let this depression this pain wont let it get the best of me,
i will stand tall to show you all who the fuck i really be,
dont fuckin call me 'C' nothing gives you that right,
what cos you went out listened to the song you pretended like?
i aint to entertain you im here to spit this shit,
i went way past horrorcore to borderline psychopathic,
you think i've had it, no i havent,
fuck em all i hope they die,
you see this axe in my hand?
bitch right in your eye...