Ayo. You wanna battle?
We'll play by ur rules.
Whatever they are.
Jus Check in.

20 lines max and not fuckin hate votes or group shit just flow and get dealt wit

And Im checkin in

Its a shame mad dogg you got em tamed\\
but still you cant refrain from insulting the rap game\\
cause your skills just plain weak\\
i think at the late spot you strip so you can eat\\
this whole battle is pointless cause you and whackness is divorceless\\
i guess your only come back is makin a riddle that dont make sense\\
forget this his illiterate ass lookin at a dictionary so that his riddles make trends\\
but his phonics cant relate to the up to date thats why I shot him and his mens\\
Murdered all his friends then he became my bitch and I made him work for his ends\\
but neva mind them cause that ironis shit is crazy\\
I really think he rap that way cause his tonge is fuckin lazy\\
but i put em back in check frontin like he tight but a flook \\
You can kiss my boots till you puke\\
It aint cute\\

Come on bro lets get it over wit and some votes please

Oh please, ya styles a disease its got people fallin asleep/
Take heed to my shit calm down a little bit cos your easy to defeat/
How you call me illiterate when your punk ass cant even spell/
I never heard of ironis or a flooke you jus make people leave an dispel/
Its a shame your vision'd wrong cos I ain't that bitch Mad dog like you claim/
But you up my ass so much like your votes for Mad Dog they don't even explain/
Two lines ain't enough or is that all your worth cos to me you just a joke/
You dick ride all the crews up in here so you can get yourself some votes/
Take sides like a bitch cos I'm a one man army in this game of gangsters/
All you can ever be is a prankster or as 50Cent says, you jus a Wankster/
I'm informin you now cos you flow and style's jus pure whack and weak/
Cos you a meek feeble excuse for a geek I seek to preach so your style you tweak/
At the minute you need to elevate cos your lines are burnt out more than a match/
Dispatch ya army, keep 'em comin cos I scratch ya record and my win I catch/
No reason to hate nor no reason to debate ya loss will equal a rebate again/
Cos fate got you worried, you will end up in a quarry, in this game you jus refrain/

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Blackmon:
i really wasnt feelin ya verse... flow was mostly off.. and the times you had it on fell off again real quick... but not too bad, you've got skills. Punches we're kind of there. Try to get your personals a little harder hitting and you should be alright, i think you know how to bust but just not the right words to fit so it flows. I couldnt find much wordplay.

Riddle:
It was good. Nothing special, no disrespect though, for the structure you used you had it going on. Really square though, like there was 2 lines i think that used inners/multis, but the rest was last words, which is ok, just not as nice sounding. Punches were ok... lol, no personals?! nothin whoaing, but i think you have sort of the same prob as blackmon, both of you try widening your vocabs and gettin the right words to work for the right lines.. you might not know what i mean, but oh well.

but yeah... my vote goes to riddle...

peace

keep elevating

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Peace man.
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Aiight Blackmon ya had a good few punches, but you called him Mad Dog? You recyclin or sumthin playa? Ya had the whole gangsta thing going on, but I wasn't feelin it or ya flow.
Riddle me that ya had better punches. Ya flow was better but a little off at times. Wangsta is a line you should never use agian. Other than that you dropped some decent Punches i.e. the burnt match one.

Vote-Riddlemethat

Return da favor (in mah sig)

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Blackmon = 29/50
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 6/10

RiddleMeThat = 31/50
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 6/10

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