I Remember

I remember the days when I benefited from having a joint parent support,
Now the only time we all get together again
…Is in the custody court
My mother couldn’t resist temptation so she committed fornication
She blames it on my dads drinking for the
…Breakdown in communication
Bull shit, I said as if that forced u to pull down those draws
The reason is that u can’t get enough of dick
…That’s the factual cause
She left and took my dads pride with her as he turned to liquor
no answer at the bottom of the bottle
…no clear head u aint getting there quicker
As he drowns himself in pity and his sorrow
He was so desperate and upset
…coz she knows that mom isnt gonna be here tomorrow
As I wait for him in bed staring at the ceiling
My whole foundation is falling down man
…I can’t describe this feeling
My emotions are way to much and I cant help weeping
Suicide seems the only way out now
…As my demons start creeping
Suddenly my dad come from the door I hear him fall and stumble
I go down the stairs I can hear him mumble
…my vision of my dad being mentally solid crumbled
He bursts out in tears and he shouts why give me a reason
In our mind this is a worse crime than
…Guy fawkes gun powder treason
Now its separate parties, dinners including the 25th of December
My emotion and feelings will never disappear
…this is something I will always remember

some Constructive criticism would be great thanx

uppin 4 opnions???

can i get some fecking opnions plz!!!!!!! feck sake

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