but theres another side to this story// one that no1 nos...//i did coke//drank//bottles of jack// fucked underage girls// both white and black//bitch ur exposed//exposed// now this case is closed //treated me like a slave// now im gonna kill ya and piss on ya grave

dont cum near me//ok..//or u'll pay // i'll kill ur wife// with a fucking knife// i cut off ur head// now ur fucking dead

feat. Baby-Girl

wack all around improve everything kid............................................... ........................

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wow i don't think my 1st post waz that bad..........not to be mean...but i don't kno jus' chill a lil, use bigger words, try to do some thing no one else has done, and try to get your lines the almost same lenth (don't jus' put one word as a line)

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so what chicks can rap too/
u won't battle me cause i can beat u/

this would b a better audio but either way its wack lol
work on structure vocab

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Lemme just say that you oughtta put a lil heart in your freestyles...