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NO i am not picking on a herb he goes to my school so i wanna battle him
peace.

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is dis da rite thread?

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always ready 4 a challenge

I`ma drop as wack as possible because i saw your battle vs fat
Key`d in 3-4mins.

I thought only oninon`s could make me cry , Until I read his previous verse
He's admiting he`s wack in bitch slapped , Proposing that i should spit first.
Adicted to garage Unware of my Skills , I mean check a weigher's balance . .
I`m spiting furious punchlines . . Having him destroyed without no talentt . .
Wrong fact`s saying your dope , You`re fake Plus you`re just a lieing baby.
He`s to afraid to show his face , Like Undercover Islamic ladies . . (muslims)
You suck more than a vacum , played? Nah but you oughta know . . .
I`ll merk you`re in text so bad, You`ll take you`re wackness to audios.

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why is dis babboon challenging me? i dont kno/
looks like i mite av 2 smack u up, make u sumbodies hoe/
look kid face the facts me and you aint equal/
i got da golden tongue, i shud b in da 007 sequal/
u go gym, but i dnt see no change in ur figure/
u may be black, but ur still a wannabe nigga/
ur flows abit weak, dnt let me av 2 force feed you lyrics/
you aint no tru emcee, you a next rap gimmic/
Mr top emcee, i'll have to cut u into sections/
watchin dem 50 cent vids, dats how u get ur errections/
its mr sections, shoutin ' im poor, sponser me'/
u aint no good rapper, ur sum chump femcee/

YO this is his verse posted wrong thread.

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ok dis is an unfair advantage cos u bin in da rap game longer den me but still, its all good wid a packet of chips

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man i was jst bout 2 re-post my verse in dis thread

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You still can . .
Please dont be mean to zero just explain where he is going wrong.
and i helped him by dropping only 8 average lines pace.

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yeh man dnt all cum at once tellin me im shit, im still new 2 da rap game yeh. jst gimme tips and pointers

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all bout da UK hip hop, dnt take us lightly
always ready 4 a challenge

why is dis babboon challenging me? i dont kno/
looks like i mite av 2 smack u up, make u sumbodies hoe/
look kid face the facts me and you aint equal/
i got da golden tongue, i shud b in da 007 sequal/
u go gym, but i dnt see no change in ur figure/
u may be black, but ur still a wannabe nigga/
ur flows abit weak, dnt let me av 2 force feed you lyrics/
you aint no tru emcee, you a next rap gimmic/
Mr top emcee, i'll have to cut u into sections/
watchin dem 50 cent vids, dats how u get ur errections/
its mr sections, shoutin ' im poor, sponser me'/
u aint no good rapper, ur sum chump femcee/

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always ready 4 a challenge

go to
www.google.com
and search ..... Emessenger
it lets u gon on this WERId MSN.

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yo wots gwainin wid dis battle. can we plz have sum votes plz....

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stop . .

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^^^^^^ Thanks for freeposting.

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y aint u votin on dis battle man? dat aint fair. dats jst cold hearted

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