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07-04-04, 01:29 AM | #1 | ||||||
This is my first post!
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Black Prez - This Mornin
IP: D49C 5D19
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/blackprezmusic.htm
the 1st track on the site. Black Prez - This Mornin |
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07-04-04, 04:37 PM | #2 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: DBCE DC18
yo man I feeling the beat, an the production was decent, your lyrics were decent but your flow an delivery need work man, some of your words you mumbled an some you stumbled over an you had no energy in your voice. Other than that you had a tight song wit jus a little work that song could be fiya, holla back
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132793 |
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07-07-04, 02:22 AM | #3 | |||||
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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IP: 4779 5259
Really wasnt feeling it. the beat was ok, U need to change Ur flow. U cant leave the beat behind unless ur next line catches up to it in a ill matter. U need to put more emotion into it, or U'll keep sounding like if Ur reading it off a page. I practice this almost as much as I do my writing. check out Triple N's shit above me, his flow is ill but some niggas might hate on his vocals cuz they aint too crazy so it feels like wat he says is limited and it dont sound too good in a luv song.
Id give Ur song a 6 out of 10, dont settle for this score, suprize us wit Ur next one. my audio is in my sig, check it out and hit me up wit some feed back. |
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