I just wrote these lyrics about two weeks ago.

Sometimes I think about the places I have been,
I wonder if I'm ever going back again,
I really feel that I'm a little out of touch,
I don't understand why it hurts so much,

I cry
For the things that I have left behind,
I cry
And I think that I might lose my mind,
I cry
As I stumble through the dark of night,
I cry
Will I ever see the light?

I can't replace all the things that I have lost,
So does the end really justify the cost?
I search for sunlight but all I find is the rain,
Why does it always have to feel this way?

I cry
For the things that I have left behind,
I cry
And I think that I might lose my mind,
I cry
As I stumble through the dark of night,
I cry
Will I ever see the light?

So desperately I am trying to forget,
All the things I swore that I'd never regret,
I think that someday I'll wake up and feel the sun,
I'll forget about the damage I've done,

I cry
For the things that I have left behind
I cry
And I think that I might lose my mind
I cry
As I stumble through the dark of night
I cry
Will I ever see the light?


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I think its real hot...a lot of people try to touch bases with this subject..but you did a good job of being different and original...I like it!
So desperately I am trying to forget,
All the things I swore that I'd never regret,
I think that someday I'll wake up and feel the sun,
I'll forget about the damage I've done,

I cry
For the things that I have left behind
I cry
And I think that I might lose my mind
I cry
As I stumble through the dark of night
I cry
Will I ever see the light?

^^^this was really the thing that caught me...keep writin your feelings and emotions straiight from the heart...and noone can ever say your pieces are wack...Uno

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i like this simply because i could feel it. if you can feel emotion behind words, then that is when words really do take meaning. i like it girl, keep it up, you got talents i didnt even know about.

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damn kid dat was hott i like it alot da everthing was on point keep doin yo thing

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yo prolly one of the best poet scripts ive read alot of emotion behind it

So desperately I am trying to forget,
All the things I swore that I'd never regret,
I think that someday I'll wake up and feel the sun,
I'll forget about the damage I've done,
yo i like that line because i feel the same way sometimes
but in the end you got some skillz seriously keep up the good work and stay up aight~1~

This piece is very touching, It's deep down inside from the heart. It makes the reader feel the pain and emotion and sorrow. It's a sad depressing scripture but you kept the reader knowing that someday there is a chance you might forget the damage you've done. Good job baby aight and keep up the good work....

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